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for Heir of light, Heir of darkness

by Sakya

person Priss368
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! You could definitely continue this. I\'m really glad you didn\'t make this non con as I believe Harry has been hurt enough in his life & doesn\'t need to have any more of it. The way you wrote their coming together leads me to believe that Harry also had an attraction to Draco-he just didn\'t know it. I wouldn\'t encourage too much angst. Harry does have the right to be upset at what\'s happened, but I think that feeling of completion should continue into their relationship outside the bedroom. As for Harry being the complacent housewife, I can see him fighting alongside his spouse (because of the prophecy) in the last battle. Then they can settle into a daily life, get to know one another & I hope have a family too (I love mpreg & I can\'t imagine Draco marrying someone without the chance of continuing the Malfoy line). Harry can settle into the role of housewife (aka \"ruler of the house\". Just ask my kids who rules at our house!). I enjoyed this as much as your other HP fic that you\'ve got in the works! Priss
person Coralynn
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. I\'m curious as to where it\'s going to go ^_^
person phoenix5285
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and can\'t wait for more to come out. Keep up the great work. Oh and it would be awesome if Harry got pregnant but if that isn\'t your cup of tea that\'s cool. Good luck!!!!
person butterpie
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but it just screams for a sequel to at least wrap up Harry\'s reaction to what Draco has done to him and the Order. Maybe Harry can be the nightmare of all housewives and drive Draco to distraction with his new status and attitude.
person Empress
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more, I need more, please give me more
person Reyn
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oo! You\'ve totally GOT to update this asap!!! I\'m hooked! I want more!!
person Jolene
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so good you have to continue!
person Melissa
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOh I love it only please make Harry realize what is going on, it will add more angst and I love when they have to go through the tough parts before they really fall in love. Also a complient Harry is just so uhg, boring, he needs to fight back for it to be interesting. Draco should need to fight for his love even while he takes over the world. Just my opinion, please update soon and often.
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay you\'ve got me hooked! I can\'t wait for more!
person scyllablue
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very Slytherin story! There is some grammar work needed and pay attention to your tenses, but excellent characterization of Draco, sly and sneaky.