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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! The whole concept of this story was wonderful. I wish you the best of luck with any of your future works and hope to read more from you soon.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow....that was....great.....
nothing else can be said....
nothing else can be said....
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t explain the words in my head. Odd. Good. Deep. Scary. Confusing. Hurtful. Raw. It\'s all just gushing through my mind. Wow...
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shudder* I never knew Gryffindors could be so eeebil!! Hurray for Psycho!Thirsty!Harry though, I love it when he\'s freaky.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh those Gryffindors are lucky Draco talked him out of it. I hope that Dumbledore and Snape took care of matters though.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesomeness this is my second time reading this story and still just awesomeness a very original story
you leave me with thoughts of harry walking through the great hall everyday and just randomly setting the griffindor table on fire or splitnering it to whirl around them or randomly taping pictures of filch\' privates to their foreheads as they sleep
oh and i REALLY pity voldemort when harry gets around to him
you leave me with thoughts of harry walking through the great hall everyday and just randomly setting the griffindor table on fire or splitnering it to whirl around them or randomly taping pictures of filch\' privates to their foreheads as they sleep
oh and i REALLY pity voldemort when harry gets around to him
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Somehow...Redemption never looked so sexy!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowww..... Strong.
You have to write a sequel. There is much more to write on in this story.
The story is original, touching, charged, psychologicaly realistic, gripping, ...
Well, having said that, I\'m going to go and check if you have other stories now. (PLEASE write a sequel!!!)
P.S.: I personally don\'t go for religion that much (and I think \'forgive and forget\' belongs more to Christianity than the others, as well as endless guilt trips and sunsequent need for redemption), and I didn\'t feel comfortable with that being Draco\'s motivation, but that\'s just me. You make your own artistic choices.
On a more wordly level I wander how he managed to drink so much and not explode or wet his pants... but, I\'ll leave that. I know that\'s not the point.
You have to write a sequel. There is much more to write on in this story.
The story is original, touching, charged, psychologicaly realistic, gripping, ...
Well, having said that, I\'m going to go and check if you have other stories now. (PLEASE write a sequel!!!)
P.S.: I personally don\'t go for religion that much (and I think \'forgive and forget\' belongs more to Christianity than the others, as well as endless guilt trips and sunsequent need for redemption), and I didn\'t feel comfortable with that being Draco\'s motivation, but that\'s just me. You make your own artistic choices.
On a more wordly level I wander how he managed to drink so much and not explode or wet his pants... but, I\'ll leave that. I know that\'s not the point.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see no one commented in this, so I would like to note:
I don\'t know if you did it on purpose or not, but in the end Harry doesn\'t get Draco\'s point. \"It\'s not worth us\" for a such a religeous person as Draco turnes out to be, would mean that it is not worth doing bad things, not forgiving, and then not worth going to hell for doing bad things. Harry interpreted it as not being worth going to Azkaban. So the story doesn\'t end in perfect understanding - that is why I think there is place for a sequel.
Another option would be that Draco did refer to Azkaban, which would mean that his religeous piety needs work, and he is, thankfully, more human than a saint in the makings. And that would be an interesting idea to explore in a sequel. It seems reasonable to me tat upon discovering religion and considering his very dark past/family Draco would at first go overboard a bit, and then, as time progresses, and he works out his new placein the world, and his new self the zealosness would diminish and get to that of a more average person - with desires and practical considerations of Azkaban. I think there were a few hints at that in the text, but perhaps I\'m just being hopefull. But the prosses of Draco finding ballance between religeus ideas and his life (and Harry) would be a very interesting thing to read about in the sequel.
All the people wanting retribution - that\'s not as much Christianuty as it is Jeudaism. And Draco seemed more into Christianity. He did get crusified. Then again, if the boy is as Christ like as the symbolism implies, then Harry doesn\'t get him. And how did the Griffindores decide to use crusifiction? They had no reason to think about it. - A good thing to explain in a sequel.
I don\'t know if you did it on purpose or not, but in the end Harry doesn\'t get Draco\'s point. \"It\'s not worth us\" for a such a religeous person as Draco turnes out to be, would mean that it is not worth doing bad things, not forgiving, and then not worth going to hell for doing bad things. Harry interpreted it as not being worth going to Azkaban. So the story doesn\'t end in perfect understanding - that is why I think there is place for a sequel.
Another option would be that Draco did refer to Azkaban, which would mean that his religeous piety needs work, and he is, thankfully, more human than a saint in the makings. And that would be an interesting idea to explore in a sequel. It seems reasonable to me tat upon discovering religion and considering his very dark past/family Draco would at first go overboard a bit, and then, as time progresses, and he works out his new placein the world, and his new self the zealosness would diminish and get to that of a more average person - with desires and practical considerations of Azkaban. I think there were a few hints at that in the text, but perhaps I\'m just being hopefull. But the prosses of Draco finding ballance between religeus ideas and his life (and Harry) would be a very interesting thing to read about in the sequel.
All the people wanting retribution - that\'s not as much Christianuty as it is Jeudaism. And Draco seemed more into Christianity. He did get crusified. Then again, if the boy is as Christ like as the symbolism implies, then Harry doesn\'t get him. And how did the Griffindores decide to use crusifiction? They had no reason to think about it. - A good thing to explain in a sequel.
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have never read anything like this before. Wonderful story, I can\'t believe what Draco went through. Keep up the excellent writing. :)