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I hope your toothache is better soon. They\'re no fun at all. As for Johnathon Brandis, I know the name, just can\'t remember what he was in. Was it the futuristic tv series set underwater? Of course, I could be confusing him with someone else and if I am - sorry. As for your boyfriend, it\'s great you have a partner who\'s so supportive of your story - and the fact that it means you post more often doesn\'t hurt either. LMAO

I loved what you did with Narcissa in this chapter. That\'s exactly how I always imagine her too. Trapped in a loveless marriage, etc with her son her only hope for the future and I wondered if that is why Snape always took such good care of him in the books. Of course, having read a few rumours off JKR\'s site it seems that Narcissa is more likely to be every bit the adversary that Lucius is but so be it. We can pretend otherwise in our stories - that\'s the beauty of fanfics. I was not expecting Draco to drop in a little confession like that so he must realise that his mother trusts Jess. And I love that Sevvy had made Narcissa a potion to combat the pain of the curse. And Lucius\' reaction at the end was just too delish for words. Can\'t wait to see what happens there. Oh what the heck, I loved everything. :) Post more soon!!!!

I have to say I like Narcissa a bit better after this chapter. But there was this one line that made my skin crawl;

Uh oh, Looks like Lucius may be planning something. Does Ginny know that Draco likes her?
By the way, Amazon accepts checks and money orders now.

She\'s pregnant? Ewww....poor kid! lol I was so sad to hear about Jonathan Brandis!! I loved his character in Sea Quest. I was bummed they took that show off!! He was such a cutie! Another good chapter!! That was so bad comparing Voldemort to Mike!!! Made me laugh out loud!!! Wow....can\'t wait to read about the wedding!! I wonder who\'s going to give her away? :)

It\'s still an interesting story! I\'m sorry about your toothache.

~Lisa

Ah Destiny,

HOW in the world could I forget about Ginny Weasley for our darling Draco. (SIGH) VERY good chappie overall. I LOVED the whole Michael Jackson and It\'s A Small World References. I was cracking up.

My ONLY caviot is Draco sobbing into his mother\'s arms....Just NOT how I picture Draco. But, then again this isn\'t Draco\'s story so I will refrain from too much talking about him...(in case you haven\'t noticed it already - rolling eyes, I fancy him a bit.)

So, FUN, FUN, FUN and glad to know you\'re moving on despite the hardships of real life!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Cheers,

Lorett

hey.... love your story. jess is some kinda mary sue, isn\'t she?^^ but hell, i like it. who wouldn\'t want to marry snape, although he is a snarky bastard... wonder, what lucius plans are for jess? well, i could go on with those rethorical questions to no end, but i shou

*chants* Pansy is a cow!! LOL!! Loved it!! Gosh, I hated that Jess had to endure the crutacius! YUK! This was another great chapter!! Well done!!

She gets to meet Voldemort, is he going to be interested in her as well?
I look forward to reading the next chapter, this is a very interesting story.
By the way, if you really are looking for those books you mentioned in the last chapter, you should try online at Amazon.com .

EEKS! Voldy in a MUGGLE\'S presence. HE\'S GONNA KNOW! He always knows....He can sense these things, so just beware.

OK, well, I\'m SO glad you spilled the beans, cuz to tell you the truth, I usually don\'t read Snape fics but I\'m caught up in yours and knowing that my sweet little cherub Draco will NOT be a bad guy has me even more invested.

OK, suggestions for Draco romances (other than myself I assume). Well, if you want to keep it in the Snake\'s den then the obvious is Pansy. If not, then of course, a little side romance with Hermione is ALWAYS a fun idea.

PLUS that would fuel his interest in helping keep Jessica safe, if that\'s what your intentions are. And it would also soften Snape\'s view of Draco.

ANYWHO. Just my humble suggestions.

Can\'t wait to see more and I must say I LOVE all the pop culture references in here. HYSTERICAL AND TOTALLY BELIEVABLE OF A MUGGLE FROM OUR WORLD PLOPPING INTO THEIRS.

Good job!

Cheers,

Lorett