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for There\'s No Place Like Hogwarts

by jessicalynch

person lorett
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! WEE! You\'re VERY witty and I love a writer who can convey that and do it well to boot! GOOD JOB. Now, I had a few favorite lines in here that I want to compliment you on...

Here\'s the first:

\'Knowing that it wasn
person lorett
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN, DAMN, DAMN, I forgot to add another of my LAUGH OUT LOUD, COUGH INDUCING LINES:

person Alila
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! Especially since I felt that I was waiting forever on your updating.. It\'s only because this story is funny, and I realy, really, really want to know hoe Jessica is going on with Severus=3 Keep going with your story! Cheers Alila
person TicTac
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Ginny and Draco get together, he must be kind of upset that she likes Harry so much.
I Can\'t wait to read about the wedding!
person Branwen
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jessica, the way Snape told her she looked.... oh well please keep writing
person Jenn
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You had me rolling with this one!!! Peeve\'s song...lol....and the part where she thought if she couldn\'t do magic, she could always poke the person with the pointy end!!! I loved it!!!! Can\'t wait to read about the weddings!! I was wondering....did you actually know Jon? I remember hearing about him on Entertainment Tonight and it made me cry....he was such a good actor and he would have gotten alot of better roles I think!
person Dreamweaver
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Merlin, where do I start? First of all, I love Seal\'s song \'Kiss from a Rose\'. It\'s simply beautiful. You do realise I\'ll be singing it all day now. LOL I don\'t think this is a Mary Sue story, Jess has her faults and her magic etc is not perfect nor does it come easily to her. Having said that, I wouldn\'t give a damn if she was a Mary Sue. I just love this story.

I love the interaction between Jess and Harry. I don\'t think he realises yet that she sees him as a favourite nephew, not as a romantic figure. Of course, it would help if Ginny realised that too. She might ease up on Jess now that she knows she\'s marrying Sev. I love that Draco\'s been sending her little love tokens. He\'s the last person she would suspect of doing such a thing. (Or that anyone else would suspect for that matter). LOL

I wondered why Voldi didn\'t queston Jess further too. Made me wonder what else he has in store for her. Don\'t like the sound of her initiation process either. You even had me feeling sorry for Bellatrix too. I can certainly see why she would be even more bitter and twisted after living through an experience like that.

schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say who gives a shit if she\'s a Mary Sue?? I mean think about it, your story is well written, and has a great plot. There are so many other stories out there that are so bad it makes you want to kill yourself. Yours is not one of them. It\'s humorous and witty, and has the right twists in the right places. Bravo!! *claps wildly and waits with bated breath for the wedding.....night*
person Branwen
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really awsoeme I can\'t wait to see what Lucius will do to get Jessica. Anyways love the story...i\'ve always loved Mary-sues. Please keep writing

I hate clifhangers :)
person Catpower
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the chapter and can\'t wait for more.