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That was great. I love the story line. It was a little shocking for Ginny to be so evil, but it worked well with your tale. Please keep updating now that Adult fan fic isn\'t doomed. Thanks so much.

Just keep uploading! I\'ll keep on reading! I wanna kill Ginny with my own hands!!

You have done what no other person has ever acomplished... you have made me truely hate a character in the books and movies.. because of ur story I now dispise Ginny.. your talented.. make her suffer... XD!

OMG, I am pissing myself laughing at the chapter title you chose. I can\'t think of a more fitting one to use. At this rate Voldie\'s likely to whisk Ginny off and sign her up for the dark side too. LMAO

Oh yes, sorry about the long review, I tend to rave on a bit especially when I\'m made to feel omfortable which is exactly what you did. :) I love the way you address and welcome all your readers. Anyways, another brilliant chapter filled with angst and emotion. I know I should be really angry with Ginny but I do feel sorry for her and her broken heart. I really wonder how Draco\'s going to step in and try to win her love now. In other words, can\'t wait to see what happens and yes, I am sure Jess will teach her a memorable lesson.

LOL You\'re poor boyfriend fretting about sex scenes. I mean why would anyone lust about Snape/Rickman? That voice, that evil smirk, those long, delicate fingers (cough). Waves fingers in front of face to cool down. Nope, can\'t see why anyone would lust after him at all. ;) Oh, I live in AUstralia so we get the episode of the contenstants singing and then the elimination part straight after it so we don\'t have to wait to see who got knocked out. After all, not much point of us voting for them way over here. In my humble opinion, if you believe in yourself as a singer, I say go out there and have a go. What have you got to lose by trying plus you get to see Simon and have his reaction to remember it by. :)

Oh my! Ginny never lets up! Surely expulsion material - victimising a teacher\'s wife. Will Albus ever notice? I\'m glad there\'s finally someone evil in Griffindor as it doesn\'t really make sense that the whole house should be full of goody-goodies.

So both Snape and Lady Snape have to live triple lives of evil death-eaters, pompously strict faculty members and lovers when off-duty. I\'ll understand if they become nauseatingly soppy in private, as a release from being so uptight to the rest of the world.

It will be a terrible thing if this site closes down. I don\'t want to read censored stories. People in real life have sex - sometimes good, sometimes bad and sometimes mind-blowingly great but it always affects relationships and loyalties. And I\'ve certainly never skimmed a sex scene in a well-written story - although I don\'t require one in every chapter.

I suggest posting your stories on a few different sites and then getting a free webpage to use to post links to your stories on. That way you can be sure your work is out there, with a central reference point to you.

With most ISP\'s, it is part of the contract that you sign that you cannot put explicit material on your site. So I guess the hosting for this site we are on now might be quite costly - it holds a lot of data too. There is an ever-growing amount of legal interference from power-obsessed busybodies regarding the Internet - it really sucks. I was originally drawn to the web because it had few laws applicable to it and you could try anything and now there are loads of rules and regs to adhere to and contracts to mind - just like any other business.

This is my favourite fanfic site - it\'s not just the HP world but other books and media and, as such, is a really good resource and a fascinating insight into what really makes a reader/writer tick in terms of seeing which books, stars etc. inspire fanfic. It is really interesting to see all the different listings and how many stories are under each topic. The HP world is by far my favourite - especially Snape. It\'s the fact that he\'s always getting angry but restrains himself from violently attacking people. Instead he just insults them. This provides endless scope for comedy. And he\'s really sexy too - partly because he\'s so funny.

Sorry - I\'ve digressed wildly from the point of this review, which was to praise your work and thank you for entertaining me with it. There you go.

SO SORRY I forgot to properlly review earlier. I was all set to review when I read your note and got freaked out. I was booted from FF for much milder sexual content on my story THE THREE KEYS and I would not suggest posting it there unless you can or are willing to edit the sexual content down and maybe get a free live journal page or a free web page and start posting your stories there.

I\'m SO HOPING AFF doesn\'t go down....I\'m FINALLY getting in the groove here. I\'ll be devistated if that happens.

So, this chapter was really intense. The beatings, the fertility drug, the sex in front of a crowd, the Harry catching Snape and Jess....EEKS. Oh and can\'t forget vendictive Ginny...geese, she\'s got quite the stick currently up one\'s red-headed butt, yes? Well, she\'s run off to Malfoy, maybe he can help her get it out...ER, or IN if the situation arises? GRINNING and wriggling eyebrows.

Well, I look forward to your next chapter and I am so sorry you lost your job. That\'s happened to me too. RUN WITH THE FINAL PAYCHECK TO THE BANK AND CASH IT IMMEDIATELY! Good luck, job hunting.

Lorett

WOW! Such quick updates! SPOILING US, I TELL YOU.

OK, now this WAS a fun chapter, but ONE THING sticks out in my Draco obsessed mind.

WHY did you make Ginny evil if poor, starved for love and affection Draco is smitten with her?

NOW he\'s gone and fallen for some dark, evil, maniac of a Gryffindor...GRREATTT.

PLEASE don\'t let Draco fall for some twit whose only going to use him and scar him EVEN MORE THAN HE ALREADY IS!

Please!

OK liking it and since Jess fell does that mean that she lost the baby?

Waiting for the next chappie and WEE! I\'m SO HAPPY you\'re going to read KEYS if you like angst, YOU if you like or want to read sweet, fluffy lemons.

Well, looking forward to seeing you on MY review pages!

GRIN!

Cheers,

Lorett

Awesome.. I lovethis vendictive ginny it is relieving that you are writing her so well, she is one of my favorite characters.
this is getting really good and i hope you can contiune to write more chappies

Oh, your poor bf. I most admit, I only skim the sex scenes. I love your story. How does Ginny get whats coming to her? I don\'t think she should be handed over to Lord Voldie that is to evil for Snape, but if Voldie captures her that would be nice. Draco should go for someone else, possibley Minerva. *giggles*

I hope Draco tells Ginny he loves her soon, before she goes of the deep end.
Personally I think I\'d rather have Draco then Harry, though I\'d take Severus over both any day.
If you put your fic on skyhawke.com you won\'t have to tone it down at all. In fact, I have seen some of the same stories that are on this site placed on that one as well.