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for There\'s No Place Like Hogwarts

by jessicalynch

person Jillian
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg.. soo good. Sure, I\'ll kick this person\'s ass.. just tell me when and where XD
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a funny chapter!! LMAO!! I just absolutely love how you are writing this!! Now, as far as the HBP, I\'ve got my money on Remus...or an original character. I\'m not sure just yet. Anyway, keep it up. You Rock!!
person Jenn
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! I was happy to see another chapter when I logged in today!! I think this story is very good! Don\'t let some \"person\" tell you otherwise!!! This chapter cracked me up....I totally can\'t wait to read the next one! I too hope Snape doesn\'t get killed off! Keep up the good work!!
person Dreamweaver
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Snape, for a moment was actually worried if Voldemort came across this lovely little creature. She
person Jillian
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
make.. more.. or I will kill you XD
person Jenn
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yessssss.....Please continue!!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens next! I especially liked the I Love Snape shirt that Jessica was wearing.....too cute!
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s great that you\'ve got your job still!!! Squeeee for a new chappie!! *huggles*
person silver1
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ack! so sorry! many of my freinds are laid off or out of work also! but pleaseplease, don\'t say that this is the end1 your stories are too good to just let go1 Will you be back again? I really really like the start of this one! please let me know, if you can, whether you will be writing any more! (libraries have the internet...)
person lightgoddess
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hon you act like you are leaving us forever!! Don\'t you worry one bit! They\'ll get what\'s coming to them!! Until then, GOOD LUCK!!
person LariLee
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ai wrote: \"urm, no?\"

A question mark usually indicates a question. \"Urm\" is not a question.

\"NO. NO. NO.\"

Though I will accept no was an answer. Hopefully, you make sense to yourself, because I doubt if you make sense to others.

\"Again, the spaces after periods and comma\'s
inserting some annoying brat from AMERICA.
Sorry, I don\'t like this fic.\"

As you are such an expert of the English language, you should be aware the plural of comma is commas. Comma\'s suggests it\'s a possessive form. Most commas do not own things. It isn\'t it a shame that Americans like Harry Potter! Perhaps you should suggest that Americans not buy the books. I\'m certain you\'ll be glad to buy all books that are usually sold in America. You wouldn\'t want JK Rowling to lose money because of you, now would you? And I\'m not really sure how you figure the OFC is annoying. It\'s hard to base that on one chapter when the OFC is unconscious through most of it.

\"and stop using your religion as an excuse thank you very much.\"

For someone who is so big on \"comma\'s\", you certainly don\'t use them in your own writing. Are you saving them for marriage?

\"It makes me want to stab you in the back, like al spineless bastards among us.\"

Perhaps I could agree, if you would explain to me to Al Spineless Bastards is. You seem to be pretty much the spineless one. This was an amusing story. I doubt if the writer intended it to be great literature. But thanks to idiots like you, we\'ll never know how it ends up. I sure had been dead a personal or just totally random like your thoughts.