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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI in just writing to let you know not all your reeders are A) IMPATIENT and B) FEEL THE NEED TO RANT ABOUT IT.I personaly enjoy your fic and was prepared to hang in for the long hawl.yes your plot is slow developing but that does not mean its bad! I think the tendernes and companioble love between harry andhis penndragonne, wich you have portrayed in vivid detail is sweet and funny, and this slow buildup lends credens to the posibility that there is the posebuility of harry and a emotionally damaged draco to have a future relationship. this way draco alredy knows he can trust harry....
another point against your impaitient ranter is the fact thet you never promised this fic would be short, pople never rant if a fic uses 15chapters to build its plot if there are say 56 chapters. I think her rudenes stems from frustration that those chapters are not yet written.
ANYHOW thats my rant, and a firm advise to ignore her(ore his?) rude remarcs.your storie is butifuly written,and the buildup between harry and draco is not lost on all your reades.i senseraly hope you find inspiraton to continue chapt.16 soon.
another point against your impaitient ranter is the fact thet you never promised this fic would be short, pople never rant if a fic uses 15chapters to build its plot if there are say 56 chapters. I think her rudenes stems from frustration that those chapters are not yet written.
ANYHOW thats my rant, and a firm advise to ignore her(ore his?) rude remarcs.your storie is butifuly written,and the buildup between harry and draco is not lost on all your reades.i senseraly hope you find inspiraton to continue chapt.16 soon.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoever said that about your fic was talking crap. I thought those first few chaps, were bloody fantastic! when Harry found Draco it was so funny i couldn\'t stop laughing for ages! And your plot is great, sure there are moments when the storys seems to be going a little slowly, but thats when the characters are built, plus nobody\'s story is perfect. If it were Harry and Draco would actually be together in Harry Potter!! I say you ignore that bitch, dont let her get to ya. If you stop writing then your letting them win. Pus you can[\'t leave it at a cliffy for too long! This is what i\'ve been looking forward to, Draco becoming human! That way he and Harry can fall in love.... You cant do this to me! Youn just cant!1 please please plelase please please update soon!!!!! I liked you story idea about Draco and the tea, it was really funny \"how much tea have you had Malfoy\" Classic.
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANyone who doesn\'t is just crazy
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANyone who doesn\'t is just crazy
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t give up on this story over the stupidity and insensitivity of the few. If they don\'t like the story, why would they have read all 15 chapters??? This story is absolutey awesome and it would be a same if you don\'t finish it. I couldn\'t write something this creative... ever. Please, please, please continue it!!! (soon??? =o) ).
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I for one adore Penndragonne and can\'t wait for chapter 16! Harry missed Silver already? Oh how wonderful! How is he going to hide Draco? And Draco just smiled at him? No matter what I want to read this story! I can\'t wait for the sequel to Cool! Perfect Pictures sounds intriguing! Why is Draco so angry? The YMCA challenge... oh I like that one! He\'s sampled half the menu and has only had 3 customers including Harry? How does he know so much about tea? Why is he wearing the bracelet? Auntie Tonks? I thought she was his cousin. Looks like a great read. Father Lucifer breaks my heart! Draco sounds so broken and helpless. I hope it has a happy ending. So what was Glue about?
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...I hope your muses come back! People who flame like that should be barbequed themselves. (GRR.)
Drace: (waves grill spatula, since he\'s a variation of Draco that works at McD\'s) YES! Those people should die. So what it the plot takes a bit to roll around? Why did they continue to read it if it bored them since chapter five?
Aylene: And who says OC\'s are bad? (pouts) I\'m an OC...kinda...and I wasn\'t given a reason for being there until later... (tugs on apron)
I understand how reviews can hurt...by getting a bad one, or not getting any at all.
All us underapreciated authors should band together!
Drace: (--_--\') (rolls eyes at Glue\'s spelling and gramar)
Oh! And something that has bugged me a bit from the begining-- \'This is not speech.\' \"This is talking out loud.\" ^^; Sorry! T\'was just something that had bugged a little.
(gets dragged away by her characters)
Drace: (waves grill spatula, since he\'s a variation of Draco that works at McD\'s) YES! Those people should die. So what it the plot takes a bit to roll around? Why did they continue to read it if it bored them since chapter five?
Aylene: And who says OC\'s are bad? (pouts) I\'m an OC...kinda...and I wasn\'t given a reason for being there until later... (tugs on apron)
I understand how reviews can hurt...by getting a bad one, or not getting any at all.
All us underapreciated authors should band together!
Drace: (--_--\') (rolls eyes at Glue\'s spelling and gramar)
Oh! And something that has bugged me a bit from the begining-- \'This is not speech.\' \"This is talking out loud.\" ^^; Sorry! T\'was just something that had bugged a little.
(gets dragged away by her characters)
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to drop a line and say that I\'ve really enjoyeed Penndragonne. Frankly, I like it when stories take the time to flesh out situations and characters. I haven\'t thought the story is slow or boring at all. Some people are just impatient, that\'s all. Don\'t let a bad review get you down- your story\'s really good. I\'m looking forward to reading more when you get it up.
Cheers!
ENIGMA_x
Cheers!
ENIGMA_x
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to see how HD react to each other!! Great story!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh, I love the new chapter, lots of fan girl screams. The tourture scene was magnificent very well done. And your description of a human Draco was great. Finally we can get to see how Draco is after being stuck like that for so long. I like the spell in transfiguration will it pop back up in the future. It was worth the time between updates. Please tell us the first meeting I can hardly wait.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every day I check AFF to see if you have updated your story. When I find it, I drop everything and just read. You have made me an addict.