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I swear you have to update soon! I almost hyperventilated reading that last and had to read it several times to check i had taken it all in! Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeeeeee update soon! And i am not ashamed to admit that yes i am begging for it - the next chapter that is ;p

Hey Tiff! U know who this is. Great story update soon

Oh so exciting a new chapter!!
I enjoyed it very much as always. The only thing that I can not understand (and this goes for all fics that I have read not just this one) is that the man and the female always orgasm at the same time and through penetration. Now call me a freak if you wish (hears yells of freak and rotton tomatos thrown at her) but I have never in my whole life had an orgasm at the same time as a man (a real one not a fake one am I right girls?? hehe) and never through intercourse (yes yes sad I know!!) It is not a critisism (okay I cant spell) to your story AT ALL!! I would just love to read a story where the characters didnt climax together. Maybe someone could point me in the right direction (*cough cough* read my original story shameless plugging I know!!)

Anyway I am looking foward very much to the next chappie!!!
Tainted Angel xxx

Ch 4 - sigh....Harry and Ron must\'ve heard Dumbledore give everyone their assignments. It is so rotten for them to still be hassling Hermione about having a separate life, I just hope their immaturity doesn\'t make them do something stupid in battle! Hermione will really have a tough time if Severus, Ron and Harry all get injured and she has to decide who to treat first. Thanks for the new chapter!

It never fails to amaze me the number of people who believe that Ron would say and do something so stupid when confronted with the idea of Hermione and Severus together. I am glad that Harry opened his eyes, and I really think that Ron had better not turn his back when either Hermione and Severus are around. Great job.

Oh, I do like this story, you\'ve written it really well. Good for Severus to have the guts to tell Hermione about the journal, I thought
that was really going to be a sticking point in the relationship if she had found out before he confessed.

Thought you handled Shacklebolts\'s death beautifully. Still don\'t understand what\'s going on with Ron, he\'s angry at her because she wasn\'t
with them and Shacklebolt died, what\'s he saying that Hermione should have done anyway? At least Harry seems to be regretting the way they
were treating her. Poor Draco, finally could be with Susan only to loose her, I had tears in eyes for that.

Thanks for a great fanfic, please update soon.

Good chapters. WTF is Ron\'s problem? Someone needs to bitch slap him.

OOOoooOO another chappie! :-) yes enjoyed it yes yes yes. I am so impaitent to see what happens next!! :-)
TaintedAngel xxx

I really am enjoying your fanfic, I want jump into the story and hit Harry and Ron on their stupid heads, (Which of course is exactly what
you the writer wants to get us hooked), It\'s strange how you have turned everything around, both Slytherins are just acting so nice, even
if I worry for Serverus should Hermione find out he charmed her journal. What do they do now, I don\'t know but I hope I will soon.

Hopefully you will update soon.

Ch 3 - well-done, Draco! Thanks for clarifying that Draco and Hermione are just friends. After those dreams with Severus and Hermione, I\'d have been very sad if it had turned out otherwise. I just hope they all survive the battle in good condition. Maybe Ron and Harry will see that Hermione\'s healing skills are necessary - there seems to be enough aurors but not enough medi-witches. Thanks for the new chapter!