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for The Domino Effect

by TaranMagdelena

person Micka
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love your story!
Update soon!
person antipyro
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooh! This is just sooooooo teasing! The Blackmail chapter didn\'t let Severus experience the thrill of passionate love making - why not? I ache for him. You wrote the humiliation excellently! Keep up the good work and update SOON!
person melody demort
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you dont need to thank me for reviews... you have an amazing story. poor virginal me can\'t fathom trying to write something i have no experience in. i deal with writing more phylysophical things... paradoxs and prophetic powers- that\'s my fort. i absolutly love this dominating over sev thing you have going.. it\'s so rare- usualy it is harry who is being dominated into submission.. and not the other way around.

i love you. really and truly. i give you comendations for breaching an entirly wonderful perspective for us snarry fans out there.^^* a very merry un-birthday to you.

please update!^_^
person antipyro
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great story line and your skill as a writer are tremendous. The easy conversations, the \'hold your breath\' sequences and the playful teasing all lend to a suspenseful (sp?) story. Can\'t wait and I\'ll be watching for updates.
person melody demort
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool. update soon k? i love this fic, and have been checking everday for updates.
person melodydemort
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. i love this story. its absolutely perfect- the thought of harry letting out his slytherin qualities...
person Arnott\'s SHAPES - Cheese and Bacon
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo, interesting plot.... yaay i like it lots, please keep updating.
person tsugumi
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is really interesting and well written. I\'m dying to know what\'s going on next and to see Sev\'s perspective. ^_^ Hope you update soon.

Tsugumi.
person Hazel
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is spectacular. I love the idea that Snape can\'t know that he needs to be dominated to save his life. How kinky are you planning on being with this? As a strict dom-Harry fan, I hope it\'s very. The lack of dominant!Harry fics is horrifying. PLEASE update this soon! Oh, and if you have any recomendations for dom-Harry fics, let me know; I\'m always looking for new ones!

~Hazel
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*interested* Seems well so far, i havn\'t seen many dom harry\'s before with sev.

you know, there is another story with the same name but its completely different *blinks* its actually a harry/draco pairing :3