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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!
Strange, but so awesome!!! Please please please continue????
Strange, but so awesome!!! Please please please continue????
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story!! it\'s so riveting. i never know what is going to happen next... and i can\'t wait to read more!! hope you update soon!!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read the fanfiction and it\'s is truly wonderful. I favor Severus being the submissive partner with Harry playing the dominant role...I don\'t know why though. *shrugs*
I had a few ideas for you as well. Here\'s what I\'ve got based off of my own relationship and things I\'ve seen people do.
Pet Names: I don\'t mean honey or darling or that kind of mushy thing. I think it would be sweet if Harry started calling Severus a shorter version of his name like the classical Sev or maybe even Sevvie. I think it shows that nicknames show friendship and affection. You could also give other character nicknames just to show friendship. Since Snape and Remus are friends Severus could nickname Remus something like Remy.
Date: Since they\'re at school they can\'t do that much without getting into trouble but I don\'t think much could happen on a simple moonlit walk around the lake. They could talk and get to know each other better.
Breakfast in Bed: Harry could swing by one morning to make sure Severus is eating by bringing a tray of food and feeding him. This shouldn\'t be so bad since HArry is already trying to get Snape to eat more.
Yeah some of my ideas are corny but you have to admit they\'re classic. ^_^ Anyway...so far so good. I love your ideas and this story so please update soon. I\'ll be waiting for the next chapter.
Sincerely,
Selene
I had a few ideas for you as well. Here\'s what I\'ve got based off of my own relationship and things I\'ve seen people do.
Pet Names: I don\'t mean honey or darling or that kind of mushy thing. I think it would be sweet if Harry started calling Severus a shorter version of his name like the classical Sev or maybe even Sevvie. I think it shows that nicknames show friendship and affection. You could also give other character nicknames just to show friendship. Since Snape and Remus are friends Severus could nickname Remus something like Remy.
Date: Since they\'re at school they can\'t do that much without getting into trouble but I don\'t think much could happen on a simple moonlit walk around the lake. They could talk and get to know each other better.
Breakfast in Bed: Harry could swing by one morning to make sure Severus is eating by bringing a tray of food and feeding him. This shouldn\'t be so bad since HArry is already trying to get Snape to eat more.
Yeah some of my ideas are corny but you have to admit they\'re classic. ^_^ Anyway...so far so good. I love your ideas and this story so please update soon. I\'ll be waiting for the next chapter.
Sincerely,
Selene
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! The whole thing!! I can\'t really find a fault in it!! I love Severus/Harry pairings!!! This one is just great!! I hope you update soon!!!
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, a bath! How sensuous and loving can you get??? I\'m really glad Severus was touched by it as a gesture of affection.
I\'m really into this fic, it\'s so different with a dominant Harry. So much fun! It\'s also interesting to see how Harry reacts to it all too.
Please write more chapters and don\'t leave us just wrapped in a towel after a warm and inviting bath like that one.
Can wait for what Harry has planned, although it may only be a foot massage or back rub.
I\'m really into this fic, it\'s so different with a dominant Harry. So much fun! It\'s also interesting to see how Harry reacts to it all too.
Please write more chapters and don\'t leave us just wrapped in a towel after a warm and inviting bath like that one.
Can wait for what Harry has planned, although it may only be a foot massage or back rub.
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good. Hope we see some loving soon. Hope Remus doesn\'t think Harry\'s bad or anything and cause trouble. Looking forward to reading more.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just finished chp.7 and............I\'M DIEING HERE WAITING FOR THE LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have the wrost timeing for cliffys (even if cliffys are bad ALL the time!) What\'s going to happen next!?, What\'s going to happen next!?!!? *jumping up & down like a sugar high child* I can only guess! Do you know how frusterateing that is!?!?! VERY I tell you VERY!!!!! *in a sing songy vioce* I want to know, I want to know.....PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY TO PIECES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Mostly to the fact that Snapey\'s the uke, yummy ukey Snapey and seme Potter *drule*.......yummy, yummy........ukey Snpaey the best thou!) Ahem......well anyway PLEASE BY THY GODS PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ja ne
ILoveIt,ILoveIt,LoveItLoveItLoveIt!!!!!!
Miss War-chan ^_^
Ja ne
ILoveIt,ILoveIt,LoveItLoveItLoveIt!!!!!!
Miss War-chan ^_^
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how Harry made Severus just about melt in the tub! Looking forward to more!!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! How can you stop right there?! Great story, poor Sevvie, though! This chapter is an excellent set-up for the next chapters. I can\'t wait for the rest of it! If I give you candy, will you write faster? *makes puppy dog face*
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad Remus! Stop interupting! I seriously thought it was Dumbledore there in the end of the fifth chapter. But no, no, no.
Surprise, surprise.
And we got a review reply. Me is so happy.
And me love plot, yes, we do. Me being baby...ow...
And it\'s so good that it\'s not just my favourite pairing(Harry/Severus), but Draco/Ron is all there too. Wonderful.
And Harry is in love.*grins*
And maybe I should stop stop the \'and\'-ing? Yes, I should. Okey...Or not hehe...
And I\'m reviewing again, maybe I should start a trend? Hmm, sound like a good idea. Yes, me thinks so.
I know I\'m babbling.
Good thing you updated there. me is sick. There is no better way to spend a day a home.*grins some more*
Now, have a happy life, and we will try to have too.*waves*
Surprise, surprise.
And we got a review reply. Me is so happy.
And me love plot, yes, we do. Me being baby...ow...
And it\'s so good that it\'s not just my favourite pairing(Harry/Severus), but Draco/Ron is all there too. Wonderful.
And Harry is in love.*grins*
And maybe I should stop stop the \'and\'-ing? Yes, I should. Okey...Or not hehe...
And I\'m reviewing again, maybe I should start a trend? Hmm, sound like a good idea. Yes, me thinks so.
I know I\'m babbling.
Good thing you updated there. me is sick. There is no better way to spend a day a home.*grins some more*
Now, have a happy life, and we will try to have too.*waves*