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for The Domino Effect

by TaranMagdelena

person Zafaran
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful. So much so that I've saved it to disk for conversion to ebook so I can read it on my PDA. I hope you muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
person Kelly Zuerlein
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW !!!! JUST NOT THE HARRY YOU EXPECT BUT WOW WHAT A TURN ON. I it for snape to be the top dog but have to say I am really enjoying this so far. Except I fill bad for Sev trhat Harry didn't make sure he got off to but then I guess that is all part of him being the dom. in this story and having to set that role befor giving the pleasue a Dom likes to see his sub in.
K.
person Kelly Zuerlein
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that was great I mean really great. Poor Sev so soon though If he thought he was tierd the first time this time will more then likely be worse so soon after the first baby. I would love to see a follow up to this story to see what they do with their life. You all did great!!
K
person tia
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations!!!!
This is one of the best Snarry Stories i'd ever read, and that means a lot because I'm a sucker for Snarry stories and had read a lot of them.
But you owe me fife houres of my Saturday because I coudent stop reading.
Exellent peace of work.

gratefull Tia
person Loveless Soul
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... talk about a bloody cliffhanger!!!! I want an update guys, and i want one NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Chrys
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When I first came upon this story I was rather hesitant in reading it.. but as I continued to read I came more and more intrigued.. I love how well written and the emotions showed in the story.. It was in the words of one Ron Weasly.. BLOODY BRILLIANT! I especially liked the Ron/draco pariing.. thats an odd combo and the fact that you made snape the uke was rather interesting.. havnt seen many(if any at all) with sev as the uke.. keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more of your handy work ^_^
person Roach
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was so sweet! I'm actually crying tears of joy from it. Goodness.

Your writing is powerful and emotional, as well as grammatically correct. I loved it. I bloody well loved it. This is getting bookmarked so I can read it every time sadness strikes, just to bring about happiness again.

I loved it. I most certainly loved it. Thank you so much for sharing such a story.
person Oo
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ron. Is. An. IDIOT. Dray is going to have his hands full from now on if they have kids....blond morons everywhere
person NYAH!!!!!
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do thier marks change with each kid? Next one is going to be a snake strangling the lion with the words YOU SLEEP ON THE COUCH!!!!!
etched into thier forearms........
person UniGirl
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favourite Snarry stories - I get it out to read like a well-loved book whenever I\'m in the mood for some angst and romance! Thank you for a wonderful story!