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I\'M MELTING! I\'M MELTING!! HOT! HOT! HOT! Wow!! I am just dieing to see more and I really want to know what Sevvy\'s new mark looks like!!

Lovely, lovely, lovely chapter!! New chapters are always worth the wait, and this one was definitely worth waiting for! I did feel pretty badly for Severus when Harry told him that Dumbledore didn\'t truly trust him. Harry grew into his role of protector well, and I love how possessive he is (and unabashed about it!). The fallout of this should be very interesting. Despite getting rid of the Dark Mark, I think Harry is going to have a tough road ahead to make up for everything he has put Severus through.

Continue the good work, hope to see the continuation soon.

Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you for the update. Yes it was a long, long wait but well worth it. The snarry was perfect and the domination of Harry over Severus absolutely complete, well, except for the impending guilt and other stuff you mentioned would happen.

Now, tell me about the magic swirling around them during the act and what exactly happened to the dark mark. Did it fade, get changed into Harry\'s insignia or what?

I\'m sure Voldemort will be more pissed with Harry now that he has the Potions\' Master as his. Wow, a prophesy and a possession to fight over. lol

Will Albus be concerned that Severus is now more under Harry\'s control than his?

All through this, there\'s been a little nagging doubt that Harry has carried on with and that is that not only can he pull it off but can he maintain it? I\'m sure his solid love for Severus will come into this equation somehow. I hope Severus will also have this love/appreciation/devotion etc. to Harry, and not just a need for him emotionally, i.e. not a black mail obligation.

Again, great chapter, loved every word of it. I know that RL can be a hassle, living through some of it now. Keep yourselves well and please post soon. I\'m all a tingle!

iv\'e come up with a new name for your fic.




Clandestine Savior

i\'m not sure why- it just seemed to fit. Clandestine- adj : conducted with or marked by hidden aims or methods; \"clandestine intelligence operations\"; \"cloak-and-dagger activities behind enemy lines\" -or- Kept or done in secret, often in order to conceal an illicit or improper purpose.


well- you don\'t have to use it- domino\'s are nice and all 0.0 but i just dont get the domino reference.

----\"Clandestine savior\"

hmmmm that would then insinuate a savior that is not so true with his intentions, or a savior in one\'s eyes that is being covert about his being more of a hero then previously thought. i like it. though, your title hints at something at the edge of reason. being that breaking connections with voldemort would cause a backlash of magic, it is suffice to say that this could have a \"domino effect\" on voldemort and those wearing the dark mark.

you still alive ther luv? people are starting to wonder where you\'ve gone. and i think, that some are insinuating thier sexual appeal in the hopes of bargaining from you an update.


until later my luvs...

m.Demort

I am really looking forward to the rest of this story. Please write more soon I want....NO NEED to know what happens next . So please write more quickly.

I really enjoy your story, very well written!! And the plot is really original, too. Write soon more :-)

smilingcat

On several occasions, Harry and Severus did engage in sexual acts, but it was usually with Severus being the recipient. Once, Harry finished what he had begun in the Potions classroom, and another time, he spent the entire evening mapping out Severus\' body with his tongue and hands, only giving in and suckling Severus to orgasm at the Potions Master\'s begging. Other times were spent in mutual fulfillment, each giving and receiving pleasure.


Hello? Descriptions please? Pleeease? AND FOR GOODNESS SAKES, UPDATE!!!!!!!! THIS IS DRIVING ME NUTS!!!

~Hazel

OMG, now things are happening! So exciting! Yaya!
For not talking about OMG, I planned the review for last chapter so long that I didn\'t get to post it...vops...*looks sheepish*
It so cute...fluffy-angst-feeling all around, oh my...*cosy grin* Me likes this stuff alot, did I say that? I think I did...Yeah, maybe i did.But it can never be said to many times, now can it? Nah, don\'t think so, no I don\'t.
All those being nice-and-possesive thingies are so cute. Thought the absoulutely sweetest thing is to dry someones hair. Oh, I love that! Thoug combing is good too...if you\'re not hairsore (can you actually say so? *word-by-word-translation from swedish*), that is...

Oh, again, wonderful chapters. Lots of cheers for you...:)