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for The Domino Effect

by TaranMagdelena

person Kalisin
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! i really adore your story and i hope you update soon! please update soon. i hate when it takes forever and by that time, i dont remember everything that led up to the new chapter, and then i can\'t read the new stuff until i have reread the first part of the story, and then i get very upset when i come to the end of the new update... anyway, super job on the story, sorry for rambling, and please update soon.
person golden sun
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh!!! it\'s starting to be good!!!! i really really REALLY cannot wait to read what\'s going to happen next!!!! i hope there will be a happy ending??? ^_^ i can\'t believe the ending of that last chapter!!!! really left us hangin\' ^_^
person Selene S. Snape
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...O.O...*Blush*...Wow. I love you guys. You know that right?

The scene was really wonderful. Do my ears...or in this case eyes decieve me? Harry called Severus an angel? Awww. That\'s so sweet. Hooray! Sev is finally free of Voldie\'s cursed mark. Hooray. And my my my Potter...posessive little devil isn\'t he? ^_^ Harry loves Sev. *Skips round throwing confetti* Woohoo! I love the way the scene was written. Harry has this affectionate and loving yet dominating presence. It\'s really good. Another thing I like was seeing a different side of Snape. In this fic he seems confused and more submissive. For some reason I like him that way. Good job.

This story is different from what I thought it would be when I first started reading. The domination and submission thing had me thinking whips, chains, and stuff like that. As interesting as that would have been my oh so innocent mind likes your version more. *Attempts to smile and look innocent...and fails horribly* Okay...I have a twisted mind. I admit it!

Can\'t wait to read what happens next. I hope Snape and Albus can still be friends. As much as the old man can meddle with the lives of others he\'s a good person. ...Oh! Can\'t wait to see how Remy\'s going to react when he finds out. ^_^ Ooo! Snape doesn\'t full realize it either! Can\'t wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. This story is like a soap opera. Oh the drama of it all! I love it! HUrry and update soon.

Sincerely,
Selene
person Lai
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gods... that whole scene was just... fuck... christ... So goooodd! I feel like such a perv reading it though.
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I dont even know what to say about this story. I mean this is one of the only sub-Severus fics ive read that ive loved! I mean i was a bit skeptical at first, i liked the reason behind Harry\'s actions but i wasnt fond of the way he treated Sev, yet. lol I love it now though, everything about this fic. The last chapter almost made me cry! Dont really know why, it wasnt truly that sad, just emotional. Lol, hormones.

Love the fic so much! Cant wait for more! - Jess
person Sailor Sol (too lazy to sign in)
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD.

Excuse me, I have to go change my knickers.

There, that\'s better. That was SO good. Now, I can\'t wait to see the temper tantrum that Severus is going to throw when he finds out what\'s happened.

You know, if it were me, since I can\'t stand that manipulative SOB for a moment, during an argument, Harry ought to throw at Severus that Dumbledore practically forced him to do this, and he didn\'t count on falling in love.

And I really think Dumbledore deserves to be on the receiving end of some Slytherin-type revenge. Nothing damaging, just a really NASTY prank. Something like, oh, making all his hair fall off at breakfast, or his robes disappear as he walks among the students. You know, something to make the Weasley twins proud.
person Faeriefire
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated!!!

*does a happy dance*
person Morgan LeFay
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh finally! A new chapter!! More suspense. Hope the health problems stay at bay. Being sick sucks. Any idea when the next chapter will be out? I love this story!!!! When it\'s done, will have to go read it from the beginninng again. Keep up the great work!! Almost as much suspense as waiting for JK\'s next installment!!
person canis_major
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just read this fic in one go and it\'s fantastic. I can\'t wait until the next chapters.
person shadow
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s cool to see harry be aggressive and dominate. While Severus is submissive to Harry. Lets hope both partners will come to a happy end. A storm is coming. Keep up with the good work. Like it alot. ahahah