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for The Domino Effect

by TaranMagdelena

person antipyro
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your link didn\'t work - it wouldn\'t highlight. Just to let you know. Please add me to the update email list for this fic.

I\'m figuring that Sev\'s link to Harry may not be so submissive. That shield spell of Merlins was some powerful, and for him to hold it soooo long showed Sev\'s power was pretty strong. (Love those two words together, sigh...pretty and strong, ahhh, images...) I\'m thinking that the bond may be two ways, but I could be wrong. I can never figure out your stories. You say that the mark is unfinished......I\'m intrigued!!!

I laughed at ....melted, just like the wicked witch of the east in the Wizard of Oz.... LMAO!! I can only imagine that fairy tales of the next 30-40 years will refer to the snake mark emblazoned into the forearms of...whoever....Just like in this fic.....and many other BTW, (but yours rules) lol

I\'d like to know what secret Albus knows on how to find Severus.

So good, you are remarkable! Love everything you write, even your name, lol

Please don\'t make us wait tooo long for an update.
person Colene Creevey
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh ^.^

*is giddy with anticipation for the next chapter*
person Quashi
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! The Snarky Snape is back! Needy, Submissive Snape was o.k. for short term and necessary for the story, but I have a warm place in my heart for Snarky.

So, do all the Deatheaters die when Voldemort dies? Or did Dumbledore lie to Harry and this whole trip was unnecessary?
person Angel
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wiiee, this is great. I can\'t wait to see an update! I really love the way Snape is in this storie even if it\'s not really canon. But it\'s faboulus just the same. Please make it a girl! Please! I do love the idea that they might have a girl... a boy is also fine I guess ;)

And make Harry pay a little, a little tears and so on... before Sevvie forgive him. I like that :)
person antipyro
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.K., I\'ve got some questions:
1) How does Remus undo Harry\'s wards on Severus\' quarters? Isn\'t Harry too powerful in his magic? or did he just use some simple wards, from the outside?
2) When Severus erects Merlin\'s Shield (Oooo cool name for a fic, isn\'t it?) is it around him, the unborn child and Harry?
3) Does Harry know that Severus is carrying a child now? I figured he didn\'t, but will soon catch on. Did Harry see Severus protect his belly?

Yeah, great chapter, and well worth the wait. I hope things improve and the next chapter is forthcoming. The great fics, like this one, are well worth waiting for, since we\'ve read them for sooooo long, and the story is soooooo enthralling and captivating and downright sexy, even if Severus is going to be mad at Harry. I think the \"I love you so much\" line will come back to Severus and he\'ll realize where Harry is coming from. Or something like that, it seemed so....so.....pivitol a line to say.

I hope Voldemort is done in quickly by Harry. *wishes are free*

I\'ll be watching....til....
person Katie K
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good! So good! Luv it! Please update soon! :-)
person nesscafe
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This fic just gets better and more dramatic w/ each chapter. I don\'t know who I feel sorrier for. Severus because he thinks it was all a lie and he was so abused before Harry came along, or Harry who really truly loves him and just wanted to protect him. I\'m glad that you won\'t be trying to change the story. It\'s fabulous just the way it is. Right now pretty much ever Snape fic ever written before HBP is AU, so don\'t sweat it. I\'m loving this story so much. I hope that Taran
person Quashi
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done. And welcome back.
person Nelver
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First thing first. Sorry about our seemingly lack of caring in the last review. I hadn\'t seen the notification, by you both have all are best wishes. I hate all things like health problems, sicknesses, illnesses and evil bodyproblems, and all the bad things they are causing everyone, and there never seems to be enough times to curse these things and just wish they would never happen. The typical walking around wanting with all your heart to wake up and see it was still yesterday...
Well, enough with the clich
person Selene S. Snape
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. I can\'t wait for your next installment of this series. The story keeps on getting more and more interesting. I\'m also pleased to hear that you won\'t be changing to fit the cannons from the Half Blood Prince. I\'d die of saddness if you did after all Harry and Severus are my favorite pairing. Please update soon.

It\'s good to hear that Taran is doing better. Have a good recovery.

Sincerely,
Selene S. Snape