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for The Domino Effect

by TaranMagdelena

person Marie
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent, keep up the good working. And it was updated early. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
person charis lupin
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story!!!!!
please update soon!!
person Katie K
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Yet another brilliant chapter as always... I can\'t wait for the next one! Please update sooon! *gives you cookies*
person Hazel
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! PLEASE PUT OUT THE NEXT CHAPTER! AND MORE SEX! Oh, and if you can\'t fit in more sex before the end of the story, start a new one with dom!Harry, please? Just for me? (makes puppy dog eyes)

~Hazel
person Purple Raveness
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story so far i cant wait to see what happens next!
person madwriter
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEVERUS SNAPE KICKS ASS!! HARRY\'S TOO!! YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Should I add that I like it?
person Quashi
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep. This chapter answered my questions. Thanks.
person melody de mort
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dear love- you are brilliance.
your most enthused admirer,
~~~~~M. deMort
person Melody DeMort
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well- that review just sucked didn\'t it? i would write more about how wonderful you are, but my keyboards\' batteries are about to die- need more..arcghhh!!!

i mean, how could i keep myself from telling anyone who will listen about your artistic flir, or your absolutely brilliant use of words as if theyflow from your tongue, thou your arms an hans intoo yor pein. if the world were to pik one person to be te onlyy writter in the time of this plce, it wouvd be you- arggh. tis frustrating,having to type so slow- not going back too fix errors either- damn, why can\'t everything electronic run on solar power?///
person Nelver
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so the mark will become....otherwise looking...later on? Oh yes, that\'s interesting. yes, it is...

And you just had to end this chapter with a jokey thingie, right?*grins*

Oh, and I just loved the line \"the sun had disappeared behind dark, ominous clouds as though it didn\'t wish to witness the ruination of its third child.\"
That was very nice written, yes. Oh, and the rest was too, go course...;P

Poor Sevvie...oh my...(oh ours? hmmm....anyway...*shrugs*)

Keep up health and the good work, ne?