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This story is really good. I was afraid it wouldn\'t be at the beginning but it has a PLOT!!! And a very good one at that. Loved your discription of Hermione running at the track meet. It was really good. Felt like I was there. Please post again soon.

that\'s awesome

I like this story a lot, it seems well written (could use some polishing) and the originality of the concept for the HP fandom. However, the only problem is that Hermione seems to be going Mary Sue in the second chapter. Yes, we all know that she is smart but it seems a tad bit too much, especially since you have her working 60 hours a week and then doing all that advanced school work. I think if you work on that it will be a better story.

this is really good! i enjoyed it very much and cannot wait for the next update. it will be very interesting to see where you take this.

I don\'t understand how both of them could have the same mate... it\'s very confusing, a person can only have one soul mate, so how can Hermione have two? please explain... those types of things aren\'t suposed to happen...

I like it so far, but I\'am not liking Harry at the moment. I hope it gets better for Hermione. Update soon please.

Very interesting start. I vote you make Ginny evil - then kill her off. Well done!

YIPPI someone finally took up my challenge , im so excited!!!! I liked the who creation story, its a new concept to the veela history. As far as suggestion for pairings go for ginny, ron and luna. I always thought Luna and Ron seemed interesting together, just cause Ron wouldn\'t really get her wackiness. As for ginny, no idea, normally I\'d hook her up with harry but since he\'s already taken I guess thats out. Hmm maybe viktor Krum, just please not Nelville lol. To be honest I\'m not entirely partial to any shipper in Harry Potter as long as the story is written well enough. Althought I thought a Harry/Draco/Hermione mix up would be pretty interesting mix up but while I suppose a Ron/Draco/Hermione rivary thing could go on it would be tougher because Draco would always bring up Ron\'s financial situation and there is just too much hate for them to truly enter a relationship with one woman. However harry is somewhat more open to things. I realize that in a lot of ways it a difficult story to write just because of their bitter rivaries and I appreciate your willingness to try it. Hope to see an up date soon :) Oh and by the way I read your little bio and we like a lot of the same ships although I actually kind of like an Angel/Willow/Spike thing, don\'t know always liked the brainy girls, However I still like Angel/Buffy better then Spike/Buffy, and while I don\'t what a lot of DBZ I still like the Bulma/Vegeta fan fics. Guess I just like fics where the couples can have \"verbal Judo\" Im a lex/Chloe shipper as well.
-CherryColaChick