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for The Lord and Lady\'s Veelas

by DoomPiggy

person cherrycolachick
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey sorry it\'s been a couple chapters since I reviewed. Loved the whole confrontation between draco and lucius against harry and the rest. Have to say at first I didn\'t like the whole hermione being a runner thing I saw her as more of a bookworm not prone to athletics but it\'s cool that you fit the story into your real life and it is definitely different. Also I love that draco and harry are the rulers of the lord and lady veelas which is an interesting aspect of the veela history.
person whogirl
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful chapter. It had a good mix of furthering the plot with the Malfoys confronting the Order about being on their side and an amazing scene in Hermione\'s bedroom. I really like how you aren\'t rushing things too much and I look foreward to more. And if you could continue to e-mail me when you update, that would be great. I know you mentioned something like that in your author\'s note.
person EmZ
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter! And yes please i would very much love an email when you update.

I am hoping for Draco to end up with Hermione (i am an avid Draco/Hermione shipper).

Dont like the way that Harry and the others treated her...

person anna
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love it!! Please update!!!
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you really need to update this story more regularly. it\'s an amazing idea and, as you were hoping, a very original take on the whole veela idea. i congradulate you.
PS: Harry seems like an ass in this. it works well with his behaviour in the last book. i definately like it.
person alicat999
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this story by luck actually, as I dont usually venture into the main list.
I have been enjoying it...but I usually miss the updates.
Do you plan on moving it to the Draco/Hermione list?
If not, could you please e-mail me with updates, as I always miss them and I\'d rather not forget about this fic, you\'ve managed to hook me badly.

I really hope harry doesnt get hermione, he\'s such a shit! lol

cheers alicia
person tabitoo
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too bad you didn\'t make the team but hey does this mean you\'ll have more time for writing this story. I hope so. I know I\'m selfish but can\'t help it, I really like this story. I still don\'t understand what happened to make Hermione all of a sudden Gah-gah over Harry. Is it his voice that did it to her, or the singing or both. I like it that both Harry and Draco are having feelings for Hermione. Though are these only sexual feelings or is there love involved? Just wondering if Harry is confusing sex with love. Anyway please post again soon.
person EmZ
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it!


you need to update soon! Please email me when you do!
person cc
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ouch indeed
person Jess
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s it? Things were just starting to get good. I think Hermione buying the broom was a bit out of character seeing as she hated flying in her first year of cannon. I do wonder what Draco had in mind by insulting her. Though I\'m glad Harry got what he deserved. I hope to read more soon, I like the way things are going so far, and I love your strong Hermione. Keep it up and please, please update soon! =)