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Wow it\'s been awhile since the last update, eh? Starting to feel that withdrawal already so I figured I\'d come and comment again :P
Personally I find it pretty interesting how you\'ve had the two Princes interact with Hermione to this point. Draco may seem to have done more considering he\'s gotten the hand-job, but since they\'re also pursueing her heart...perhaps Harry\'s first kiss is foreshadowing what\'s to come? <-- :) ya I know she was seduced by the song but you know what I mean ;). Keep it up with this story :D!

This chapter was definitely interesting, I thought draco and harry craving vanilla with cinnamon was a nice touch. Although the whole mating kink seems a little brutal, and perhaps I missed this I was reading kind of fast but who is nymphadora\'s mate? Hope for an update soon :) gotta go take a final in trig which sucks :( but atleast I got a little sunshine in my day lol.

*giggles* I\'m sorry dear Piggy. I get a story I like in my head and it just becomes \"what\'s going to happen? Is it Route A, B, C, or 42?\" then I map out all the possiblities. Keeps me entertained until the author\'s next update, then the process sometimes starts all over again. BTW, thanks for updating! *squees in happiness and throws cookies at author* See, I\'m feeding you just like the note up top asks for. Well, you\'ve made it perfectly clear that Hermione is uncomfortable on the subject of dating. One wonders how she\'ll react to learning of Draco\'s helping hand last night. Unfortunately I\'ve had a close friend raped and tried to help her navigate her psyche afterwards. She swore off men and acted quite skittish around them, even her gay male friends. Though sad, it\'s understandable behavior. Let\'s hope Harry and Draco are sympathetic to her, otherwise they\'re in a load of shit, yes? I do get the fact that both Harry and Draco have been horrible to her in your backplot, and if either or both are going to end up with her they\'re in for a fair bit of karma-payback and groveling. Oh, hey, quick out of the blue question. What if the Veela\'s mate is a lesbian? That damned law wouldn\'t force her to take the male Veela as her mate, would it? That would be uber-wrong :( Oh, is Ginny just an Super Bitch(tm) then? Thanks for the DA explanation, I hope the idiot male DA members get over themselves and allow the girls back in. They\'re leaving them quite vulnerable at the moment, excluding them from vitally needed self-defense knowledge.

Great chpater. iliked the interaction between Harry and Draco. Eventually they would have to get along to share Hermione.

I\'ve only read the 1st chap and felt I had to review before continuing. This very creative. I like the historical and mythological perspective that you have put on this. Excellent! I am looking forward to your take on the Veelan challenge. I can\'t imagine that it would be boring or commonplace.

Thanks for the e-mail update. This was another enlightening chapter, explaining and setting things up for the next chapter. I look foreward to Hogwarts and more.

URGH! you are mean! I am REALLY GETTING INTO THIS. SERIOUSLY. UPDATE. I will be pining for this, its bookmarked. I hope to the great Nine you spare us mortal readers some slack and give us a chapter. OH GOD PLEASE you just HAVE to HAVE to HAVE to.
Much love
Eddie

First off, I have to say I love the story so far. I\'m on a Veela binge as of late (second only to my Blaise/Hermione one :) and your story makes me all warm and happy inside. I can\'t wait for you to post more! Secpnd, since I\'ve been rereading it a few times, waiting for updates, I\'ve asked myself a few questions. We know Draco and Harry are 18, which is the age of majority in some places, but Hermione\'s only 15 in your story. So can she legally reject them until she gets older, then decide on one or both once she turns 18? What\'s going to happen when McGonagall finds out about Hermione being the mate of both? I mean, McGonagall helped Hermione come to school early to escape her father\'s unchecked reign of molestation (and at such a young age... 7, 8? *sniffles* poor girl), might both women think this is similiar? I don\'t see Hermione readily accepting that due to a law another male has control over her, in fact I can see bad things, like flashbacks, breakdowns, other post-traumatic stress disorder symptoms, etc. happening if they tried the direct approach of telling her she\'s their mate and they have rights over her. Of course, if they tricked her, which Harry was already stopped from doing once, I can see her hating them for trapping her. Why are all girls except Ginny and Luna banned from the DA? I hope you explain that. Plus, your Ginny sounds like Riddle diary has left quite the nasty influence on her, either that or she\'s insanely jealous of Hermione. Cheers to Cho and Neville standing up against Hermione-bashing! I like your Pansy too, I hope the group of Neville, Pnasy, Cho and Hermione become friends. Oh, and does Dumbledore already know that Hermione is to be Harry\'s mate? You\'d think he\'d feel somewhat protective of her and her safety after the whole father incident. I can\'t wait for the explosion to happen once the meeting in Dumbledore\'s office learns the future Veela Kings both have the same mate. Sorry for my ranting, but I enjoy picking an author\'s brain every once in a while :)

pleaz up date soon.. and i think both but make them work for it and some come togather has freinds

this is a great story. I like the H/HR/D combo. If you make a list for updates I would love to be on it.