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for The Lord and Lady\'s Veelas

by DoomPiggy

person HaNnA16
schedule January 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You probably won't see this... But I just want to say this a great beginning!! I love how you have written the characters! Please continue this story! Update soon!
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
since doompiggy obviously isn't going to update( it's been 3 years people!), I was thinking someone could use this idea and start their own story..
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi.
I have read this fic a couple of times because it is veela, it is well written and has a great plot that can go in thousands of directions. I like that Harry and Ron have in my opinion caved to the pressure in the wizarding world and have given Hermione a hard time. I would like the Lads to relieve and work together, surely Minerva will go completely APE about it Hermione being Harry's and Draco,s mate that would make a brilliant scene. Hope the computer and your writting muses are working because my only problem with this fic is it haven't been updated in a long time.
person mlui
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story...I hope you'll update soon! Please! Also, I don't know if you noticed--but, the story started with a third person perspective, then to a first person perspective, and reverted to first to third person perspective every so often...
person Griffyn
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon it wold be a shame if this story was abandoned like it appears to be.
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE I NEED TO KNOW WHERE THIS IS GOING!!!!!!!!!
person aquijess
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Varro, Claudius, Dardanius, Clitus, Strato and Lucius are all servants of Brutus in Julius Caesar. Varro, Lucius and Claudius are all present but asleep the first time Caesar's ghost visits Brutus. Brutus asks Dardanius and Clitus to kill him but they refuse after sending them away he gets Strato to hold his sword so that he can run onto it thus killing himself. Lucius and Varro are also characters in Timon of Athens. Lucius is also a charater in Titus Andronicus. Claudius is the name of Hamlet's uncle. Please update soon I cannot wait to see how the boys react when the find out they have the same mate.
person Eddie the Black Maru
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.......I wonder when this will be finished....le sigh
person meg
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me likey more please.
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?