rate_review Reviews

The story is...interesting. Well, the plot is interesting. I thought this will be more draco/hermione fan fiction so, I will be honest when i say this, I expected that things will more be around them two. Well, it;s just begging of a story.
Now, the thing that I was wondering a lot during the story, don't get me wrong the plot is great but, i just can't put this politely, so please forgive me for what's coming next:
WHAT THE HELL?! How could you write that Hermione and her brother had sex?! It is disgusting! I can read male/male threesome/moresome I even found Hermione/Voldemort (or was it Voldemort/Hermione?) but i just can't read the thing where brother and sister are fucking! it is disgusting! I mean, they ARE BROTHER AND SISTER!!!
Besides that i like the story.

Wow erm I'm not sure if you noticed but WARNINGS are extremely helpful to readers when searching for a specific sexual situation/plot in stories!! Please put INCEST in this story's summary & tag it as such PLEASE I beg you. I felt tricked when I read that part and I sorely hate not reading a fanfic I delibertly chose.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

At the moment, I am sooo confused. Why so many names and such? Can't you just explain the 'past' or whatever in the first chapters or something? Cuz 'somewhere else' or whatever is confusing and then 'Back to Present'. I like your story, don't get me wrong, but a few chapters are confusing.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

ooh... i love this fic... it is so good... i like it that you\'re not rushing into the whole draco/hermione relationship... we all know that hermione is played by emma watson... but if you were to cast lestaw and ewan, who would play them? cause i want to visualize this... i hope you update soon

My mother is a twin. My brother and sister are twins. I have boy/girl twins myself. Yes, these things do run in families. There IS such a thing as boy/girl identical twins. It is EXTREMELY rare. I am not a doctor, but a doctor was a speaker at a Mothers of Twins convention I went to, as he explained how he had treated such a set of twins. According to him, if you are carrying twin boys, XY/XY, and the mother\'s health is adversely affected early on, it is possible that one (or in some cases both) of the chromosome pairs will switch to the stronger pair, that is XX, or a girl. Yes, ladies and gentlemen, the stronger chromosome pair, female. Thought I\'d share. The doctor was a professor at Univ of California, San Francisco, Medical School, but I can\'t remember his name.

this story started out great & has a great attention-getter. although i see you want deep character developement; it gets confusing towards the later chapters. the whole thing with ewan & hermione being together is a little unrealistic & very incestual, which is something i don\'t like. the later chapters are very complex & hard to follow, so i think u need to cut down on the number of characters/ make the names very different & clear. i\'m not sure where the story is going right now, so a clear plot would be nice & it would help the reader understand the story better. good job on your 1st Harry Potter fanfiction & i hope you don\'t get discouraged because of my comments. keep updating & i hope to read a completed version of this story soon!

first off id like to say im very interested in the story esp with hermione being one of triplets each in each school we know of-and of course being slytherin air. however somethings bother me. would the two boys really be named sltherin? shouldnt it just be the eldest-the only person i know who does that is george foreman. but then angain if they are to be seperated at birth and their lives are in danger it makes sence. however- they wouldnt have been raided by those names particularly if they were to be hidden in the muggle world. perhaps their middle names is what the two went by. and im assuming the two have never meet herminoe given their resemblence. however the two should know of her thanks to the triward\'s tournament press. esp id think more on lestrew since she had realations with viktor and thusthat press would have been more of interest to them-but seeing as viktor is an international star it would be in the french press as well again. and of course the same last name would have caught their interest. and then of course the matters of 5th yr ifthat made the press.
im assuming they are in 7th yr since you said 6yrs of friendship.
also how does lestrew know of snape?