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for The black sun rises: Bleak dawn

by badgerdude

person lilywood
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and it is so good! I really love the dark Harry stories. Please continue. I would like to see Ron and the survivors get it. As you can tell, I am not a fan of Ron or Hermione. Please Update soon!
person Nymphe
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! Yeah, that was painfully short and I hope you have something more around the corner. Remember, you are writing for yourself first, us second. Now, kick your muse in gear!
person Tra
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the worst fanfic i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person yana
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I most say that if you end your story in such crappy way, all your previous chapters become worthless too.
Your story wasn\'t so bad!!! But I just found some new character odd and confusing ( like those gardians and justice? what was Hermoine?)
English is not my first language. Mabye that is the reason I don\'t understand everything.

But all this doesn\'t mean I don\'t read your story. I do like your idees.
I apologize that I didn\'t review more in the past. It\'s just very difficult to write down what I think, when I don\'t know the language so well.(I do try.)

I hope you don\'t give up this story. But if you do,I don\'t blame you. (People didn\'t review enough.)
Here was my support.
~greetz
person Anon
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you don\'t give up on this story because it\'s one of the funniest things I\'ve read yet! You have such talents as a parody writer that I would hate to see it wasted! Please keep up the good work and keep telling people not to take it so seriously! You are TOO funny!!!
person theheir
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think this story is really good, well i kept me gripped to my computer chair. I dont normally review fanfics but this one stood out from the rest keep up the good work!!
person Nymphe
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. Let me guess who was the woman who kissed Harry\'s robes---Bellatrix. Update please!
person yana
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is just great!!!!!!!!!
this is a really good dark harry fic , please continue
update!!!!!!!!please!!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more MORE MORE MORE
person Nymphe
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is next to impossible to find decent evil!Harry fics and I hope yours becomes popular. I am loving the story eventhough it is moving a bit too fast for me; I am mentally out-of-breath! I know I will have a nightmare tonight... After Harry gets done with Voldy, I hope he and Ginerva display some lovely lemon scenes.