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for Taken and Kept

by Jemixe

person centaurius
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this could be interesting reading please continue - Thanks
person pink_fogg
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
looks promising so far
looking forward to see more
person LoverofallthingsPttR
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this first chapter was very good... i often find that it is the inspiration from a challenge that creates some of the best fics! :)

i\'m really interested to know if Lucius and Severus are working for or against the Order in this fic and maybe even a little more information into their relationship...? i also can\'t wait to see how Draco is involved in the plot. it really is a very good start and i hope that you continue with this story.

thanx,

LoatP
person Shivawn (not signed in)
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh fun fun fun! I really love this! Omg! Update soon please! This is awesome...what I would suggest...make the chapters even LONGER =) great story...don\'t want it to end =( This seriously has caught my attention like CRAZY! I DON\'T WANT THIS ONE TO END! Update very soon...like, A.S.A.P. please lol
person kizunaspring
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are off to a wonderfull start! You grabbed my attention and held it with an iron glove. cant wait to see what is next. you portray sev and lucious wonderflully. good luck and happy writting
Kizunaspring