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for Desire

by wineandwit

person ancientgirl
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a one shot?! No! You really should think about making something longer. It\'s wonderful.
person Amber
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. You painted such a desolate picture that the ending was amazingly happy. Makes me wonder what inspired it. Bravo. :)
person robin
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a wonderfull stroy. i think the langth was good and liked the point of vew. the way you write HG\'s taughts is almost like you are writing the thaughts of a goast. verry apropriate. the end was butifull and sweet.
person Susan
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story. Interesting ending...left me wondering what happened to him and to her. I look forward to more stories from you.
person Bambu
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet... and it reminds me of stories I\'ve heard of WWII veterans who wandered across the continent in search of a way to get home. In some cases they were incarcerated in each new country because they didn\'t have the right papers... as any released prisoner of war wouldn\'t necessarily have them. It was nice to read this, and I liked the fluffy ending.
person June
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story!! I like the way she keeps going - a \"dying woman\" - fueled only by her desire to see Severus. I don\'t know if his memory was ever really gone, or if he just got put into the camp because of his Mark and not having proof that he was a spy for the Order; both are believable. I would imagine that in the confusion of post-war recovery, it would be too easy to temporarily lose Severus, and I\'m glad it was Hermione who found him. Thanks for sharing this!
person vblum12
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww