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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this. I like how each chapter changes perspective, different characters each sharing their views. When I first read it, I believed it was a one shot, and I\'m so pleased it\'s not. I hope you continue with this. It\'s interesting. (On a side note, I LIKE how you portrayed Peter in that last one. The lowest level of hell IS reserved of betrayers. Peter can spend eternity with Brutus and Judas. And I love how you portrayed Narcissa. A TRUE mother\'s love really is pure, and I like to believe that in the end, it will prove strong and redeeming.) Until next time.
Jemi
Jemi
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Narcissa! How horrible for her! Thank you for your kind words. I can\'t wait for chapter 5!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. I feel sorry for Blaise. Their room sounds so homey. That would be a hard conversation to bring up. I can\'t wait for chapter 4!
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!
The end line was simply perfect.
\"You see; if he doesn
The end line was simply perfect.
\"You see; if he doesn
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an eerie piece you have written. Poor Severus wearing the proverbial \'hair shirt\'. I like the way you have made them so different yet so alike... Good job!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s so sad.... My heart is actually aching for Severus! You are such a fantastic writer! Keep it up!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was bloody great darlin. I Loved it. Ok, you got me kinda teary eyed too. Very nice. Keep up the loveily ficlits.
-F.C.
-F.C.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. (jaw hangs open) that was fucking awesome! I\'m not only talking about the smut, but the way you wrote out Snapes twisted morals. That was great! You totally rawk with that! Excellent job!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very short but very HOTT(the extra T was needed for this)!! i encourage you to write more....get some *ahem* touching involved. can we say sexy-ness?! phew *pants for breath and lights a cigarette*
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He does it only for them. *sigh* What a delusion. You wouldn\'t think that Harry would be so shy after all that. You should write more! Will he break? Will he finally give in?