AFF Fiction Portal
person anon
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that sucked
person Andrea
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I\'ve got to say is that was absolutely wonderful. Don\'t add anything to it, don\'t take anything way from it, just leave it the way it is. That was an absolutely lovely story, I enjoyed myself very much. I could see the two of them very clearly in my mind\'s eye, silly children, and they were just so cute -- in that perverse sort of way. Wonderful ending, I\'m pretty sure my jaw dropped at the way you finished it. Beautiful story, great job -- keep writing.