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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A really, really good story. Nicely done!=)
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the ambiguous and dreamy quality of this fic. Even though the content was pretty direct, the language still had a bit of a melancholic quality to it, creating a very good surrounding atmosphere. Really liked the quirk in the end too. ;)
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a bit too abstract, with lots of vagueness that wasn\'t quite resolved by the end.
A valiant effort, however.
A valiant effort, however.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To quote: anon 2005-02-16 id # 2035157000
\"well that sucked\"
It did. It sucked Blaise\'s penis, in a most delightful manner.
Awsome fic, I love how vague it was. I think too many authors now are becoming too involved in their own made up details about HGxDM that it contradicts the books/the character\'s personalities.
At the same time, few people can pull of the vague-ness you did with out also losing the ... \"substance\"? (Sorry, can\'t thin of a better word.) Its left to our own imagination how HG and DM got to be HGxDM. ... but it a good way.
So anways, good job for keeping the characters true and all that, and great job for writing an awsome awsome story.
\"well that sucked\"
It did. It sucked Blaise\'s penis, in a most delightful manner.
Awsome fic, I love how vague it was. I think too many authors now are becoming too involved in their own made up details about HGxDM that it contradicts the books/the character\'s personalities.
At the same time, few people can pull of the vague-ness you did with out also losing the ... \"substance\"? (Sorry, can\'t thin of a better word.) Its left to our own imagination how HG and DM got to be HGxDM. ... but it a good way.
So anways, good job for keeping the characters true and all that, and great job for writing an awsome awsome story.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well written, different, and great! liked it, liked it, liked it. woo
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this. It\'s tight, free and nicely sensual. Quiet and powerful, too.
The best part for me:
His mind is split in two - between the man in his mouth and the woman with the
bushy hair and slightly protruding collarbones.
Beautiful. I like realistic, believable detail, it adds so much to the tone of the narrative,
the voice of the character.
It adds a human dimension to the romance,
which is something I personally prefer, having little patience for overblown, decorative prose.
Nicely done.
Madame
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would have reviewed sooner, but this story was... well, let me put it this way, I read it, then I had to read it again... then I had to ponder it over work... then I had to read it *again* and you know what I came up with? this fic is fucking brilliant! I love the whole concept, and I can only hope that our little gryphindor doesn\'t quite hold to the rules at the very end.
excelent job!
excelent job!