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so about those bracelets..........for a first time smutt scene that was way above rookier u sure that was your first?

Interesting. I\'m from Ontario too, (Ottawa) and I remember very well the news report about those fucking bracelets in schools and how parents were outraged. I have a few years on you and I rememeber thinking, jesus, so much over nothing. Like teenagers really need a fucking bracelet to have sex and how brainless students must be to envoke a wrath for something so meaningless. Then you go any write a story about them...

I highly doubt most of the aff readers even know what global tv is, let alone where your idea came in. Jargon is the technical terminology or characteristic idiom of a special activity or group, otherwise being specific to certain circumstances that can otherwise be unrelated to the majority of people. Remember this when you write.

Rock on my Ontarian,

Betty

aha. i remember when everyone was so pissed about those bracelets... well, the parents anyway. i had dozens... still do somehwere, lol. anyway, loved the story, and the bracelet part. i\'d completely forgotten about them until i read this... i think im going to go find them. ahah.

I realy think you should explain a little more about the multicolored bracelets, because I seriously have no clue what they mean. I do like the story though... I was just very confused about the bracelets because I don\'t know what they mean.