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for Dying To Be With You

by freakenbree

person Kana
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You soo need to update. Please, don't leave me hanging in the air like that... (Is that a correct English expression? Probably not, well, hope you get what I mean:)). In other words: I wanna read what's going to happen next... I wanna know how it is going to end... Because the end of that second chapter... You just can't leave it there... :)
Keep up the wonderfull story and writing! :)

Hugs
K
person Sharyn
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just started reading HP slash recently and have enjoyed your stories. Did you ever finish this one? I really hate being up in the air about the ending. I hope you have finished.

Otherwise, I just wish to say please keep writing as I love reading.

Sharyn
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please please please UPDATE
person Elehyn
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very interesting and I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Update soon please :)
person freewater
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is really good, i like the story idea becuase i\'m completely in love with angsty stories ^^ Poor Harry, Snape\'s all mad at him ;_; please update this soon, i really want to see what happens next!
person Joey
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"The man
person Moi
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is English your primary language? The reason I ask is that some of your word choices and structures are...odd. Mechanically you write well.

I\'d like to see you continue, in the hope that you have an original twist on the theme.
person Kat Potter
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it! Can\'t wait for more. Kinda angsty, I like that. (Maybe I\'m just a masochist :s ;) )
person alliekatgal
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Nice chemistry there!!