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hmmm, i had a thought. its probably to late to work this in now, but could har say some of the rogue shadows obey V cause he has har's blood and therefore a touch of is power. i imagine it'd be like moths being attracted to a candle and then dawn comes and they forget the candle for the sun.
just a thought anyway. after har got parceltongue from V so what did V get, neh?

I love this, my God I love this. The chapter was so dark, I can't even describe my reaction; speechless is a good word for it. I love angry dark Harry! Though as much as I love his growth which I really do, I want to know more about the werewolves and what Sirius is up to. Can't wait for the next chapter!
~Pen

Woah... Just, wow! Vicious little Harry we have here in his vengeance. I take it the Dursleys still have more torment to be put through and that's why they were vanished? Oh and that other guy to, the one who first suggested it to Vernon. Well, Millicent will not be going back to Hogwarts any time soon, girl is probably scared witless. Only destroy rocks and such, indeed! So glad to know Dumbledore is so oblivious; for all that Harry is supposed to kill the Dark Lord, yet he'd never go out and harm someone. So casual too, 'woe be to the Death Eaters who cross his way.' Now the healing can slowly begin; got the bulk of it out of the way with that display. Wonderfully done, and I can't wait to read what you have in store next!

Leania

Thats useful to know. anytime he wants Fawks out of his head, he just has to let the rage rise.
hoolie d loolie. Talk about making your point with a mallet. *cues the dead bodies every music again. that blade and cock punishment was rather creative.
I'm glad V's there for him. Knowing you've killed and in rage is going to be hard for him but with v and the shadows help, he will accept it or at least come to terms with it. I wonder what will happen to dear Millie now.

So things are starting to become challenging enough for Voldie, hmm? Is that Ministry worker (don't remember the name...the "stamper") going to send out that letter write that journal? So Ginny may not be with Harry after all, hmm? She believes she loves him, but perhaps its not really love of the kind she wants, but more of admiration. Hermione I still see as a challenge to bring to Harry's side, her own beliefs and obedience of authority will make 'recruiting' her a challenge. So is Sev going to answer the 'call' or will the Shadow's intervene? Or will he accept the Shadow's offer before he is summoned? I await for the next chapter!

Leania

again, lots of forebodings *cues Korn's 'dead bodies everywhere' as background music... and cranks it at the good bits.

hah, V doesn't seem to value his troops that much, or is that just the 'foot soldiers'. Kinda makes you wonder why they join if they're so 'throw away item'. At least, the ones who didn't have fear as their motivator.

nods to Gin Gin, i wonder if she'd be so willing to live/die for har now that's she's getting to know the reality. The end of the chappie says she really doesn't know him very well, or at least hasn't come fully to terms that he's human, despite all the crazy events that happen around him and his power. Humans, like he said, hate, love, hurt, crave vengeance, FEEL. har is no saint, not to desire such things [even the saints had to lean on God for that as they can't do it in their own strength, it's in fallen human nature to lash out at those who hurt us. it takes a higher being, or leaving behind of human frailties as you move closer to nirvana (depending on your philosophy/beliefs)to swing forgiveness without a desire for vengeance, intense rage etc.]

It's awesome that har is willing to stand by his friends even with all that rage simmering away back there. pity he can't arrange for Xeo to have a little accident. >>

heh, poor amelia. i can understand her frustration a bit. 8 aurors dead means 8 that have to be replaced, trained etc, with their resources already stretched, as well as the personal level pain of losing subordinates, its troublesome. Not to mention of having their 'dead-to-rights' (well, sort of anyway) target ditch them. Still, V's not a D.L. for nothing neh?
on a side point, oh, the Goblins are sooooooo very toast, burnt and extra charcoal y.

For a D.L. V has a very up beat attitude. don't see things as problems, see them a challenges. Very power of positive thinking. *once again cue's the 'dead bodies everywhere' music on behalf of the goblins. wow, sucks to be them. They're going to get dead either way, it's just this has stepped up the time table.

Will V be angsty over the shadows snagging Snape? Will Fawks be able to pick it up? I know snape can Occuld with the best of them, but surely theres a difference between shadow minion and a regular pleb?

awwwww, it's sweet that he misses har. V is probably the only person har knows who completely understands his pain and once har has recovered some, vice versa. Har still has a lot of stages to go through on the recovery trail.

shakes my head at the wizarding world. i can't believe they don't take into account mental damage. seriously, this 'there's no physical evidence so no harm, no foul' thing has got to go. V and Har are in for a crap ton of headaches legislation wise when they take over... good thing they'll likely have Mio to help.

won't har going berserk and killy, killy, bring dumble doubt down on them though? well, i suppose it's how he goes about it (and if there are any witnesses) that will say how that plays, that and the events leading up to it. Har's been relatively calm to date. He's due for an emotional explosion of some kind or other.

looking forward to the V on Har action next. They both seriously need it. It's seeing how they manage it that'll be the fun thing.

i kind of feel bad for bliase and Millicent i hope that they suffer but do i really draco was the prince i think that if they give harry loyalty maybe they might save them self

so good

Interesting chapter; so Milli is looking for forgiveness now? Wonder how that'll pan out. Very good on the fight scene between Voldie and the Aurors. I wonder what the Dementors and the Shadows are going to do, I don't see how they can heal, and unless they "Shadow-walk" a healer there... Guess I'll just have to wait and see, hmm? Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter.

Leania

blinks... well, that's a rather foreboding chappie.
for shadowing all over the place.
the auror's have seriously got gall attacking voldi straight up like that and i can't see him just letting it lay. Still, he's not invulnerable and it's probably time for him to stop acting like he is.
As for Ollie... where DOES har fall in that? i mean sure his alter form is pure blood tenshi but he's also straight human...
well, now we know what the journals were for. nice. so i doesn't matter whose bit of soul is stuffed back into what bod as long as there's a bit of soul in there to twist?
i can feel sorry for blaise and millie, they were following orders... mind you they were stupid orders but still. I hope har will be contented to vent on them and not go after younger siblings and such.
I know she's desperate and what she's about to do is not quite bright, but waiting for the other shoe to drop has got to be one of the worst feelings in the world. you're turned into this small cauldron of bubbling dread and nothing distracts you. At least when you know the consequences of your actions you can adjust to them (though i think in her case, she'll be dead)