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Oh thank god a great fanfic has been update, after the horrible influx of shitty stories... Off to read :D

I really feel for Severus, he's trying so hard to fight only for it to be hopeless in the end... I understand that Ginny serves a purpose and I'm sure she does it well but I still don't like her. And you are just teasing me with my wolves! They were barely in there this chapter *pout* This was a good update anyway. Can't wait for the next one!
~Pen

first off, let me just say. kudos for getting this done and up with RL distractions carrying on around you.

and so the first hints of har's less than light alliances come to light. you tell 'em gin gin.

heh, har may have been well taught but now at least he has a worthy subject to work his will and whiles on. Is some of that stamina coming from his alt form or is it mostly teen hormones and a serious lust build up?

heh, i suppose you need to think out side the box a bit for that one. neh, instead of flooding a room with light to keep the shadows out, would utter darkness work as well? i mean, once they adjust to hars total purity light, other lights would become shrug worthy neh?

germ warfare huh? Har, you're brilliant. AND V doesn't even have to get his hands dirty. ^^

ooooh, how long before har gets to get killy, killy on the poor little DE's. Man it sucks to be rank and file huh. :D

wow, a most impressive display of power there. So, the old shadow fist around the heart trick huh? *in my best 'get smart' voice. haven't seen that one in play since book 3 (i think) of david eddings Belgariad. and Har left his in place. its undetectable I assume?

I sat down a month or so ago and read this story. What an amazing trip. I just finished ch 73 I think. I like how you pointed out how the blood was everywhere...soaking into Millicent's robes, on Harry's feet, and spread out over the floor. Those two Death Eaters were either very foolish or very loyal to come in after being ejected from the throne room like that. I also imagine that the Shadows will get quiet a feast from Harry when they eat his shadows from his light. The parting threat to Millicent seemed to be an incentive I believe. :)

Great chapter love the sexy times ;) can't wait to see what happens next.

This was delicious! Great chapter and the smut was wonderful! This entire story gives me chills reading it do wonderfully dark and masterfully written. Though I am still waiting on my wolves to come back into the picture. I did enjoy the scene with Ginny and the rest of them, my personal feelings on her character aside (I dislike her, I find her too easily given to obsession and refusal of reality) she gave them an excellent topic to chew on. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next!
*Pen

*blinks. har was surprisingly accepting of the mass of technically murders he committed. though, in reality it might be more considered putting down sick animals. when you think about it, the odds are if they had been tried and sent to prison they would have ended up dead anyway... apparently, inmates don't like child predators and nasty things tend to happen to them. Har just saved the state a lot of time and energy, though it's a pity any of the others of their kid haven't been identified and pulled down. no child deserves that. Ah, well, that's for later, when they have W.W. sorted. i imagine they'll come down hard on pedos and their ilk then. har was pretty creative with those blood knives. I look forward to seeing what he thinks is appropriate for those remaining. Maybe something involving the shadows? after all, V have experience but the shadows have had eons to pick things up. ^^. right now they have more important fish to fry.

i can feel sorry for snape though, traded like meat, with neither really fussed about his pain or fate, though at least he'll likely live through it. So, were the shadows promises of peace to him made up of hole cloth or were they presenting a rose coloured version of things to snag him? Either way, he's got no escape now and no one to fall back on. he may as well do himself a favour and surrender.

Dolohov is interesting - I wonder how he'll take it when he learns that har is a true and equal mate, no merely a seduced pet.

I'm glad V remembered their time limits. Har can only stomp off on his tanty for so long before ppl are going to start looking or calling for him, though theres nothing to say they can't have fun in the mean time. I wonder what they'll make of Millie up and vanishing... well, i don't suppose there'll be all that many who care though Blaise, all alone now, is probably going to be more stressed than ever. they had misery, and a sort of death row comradery happening and now there's no one to share the load. i doubt he'll last long.

Was not expecting harry to handle the aftermath killing those fools that way, but it was nice surprise. But I'm totally booooing the cut off on the Harry/ voldie sexy times in this chapter :P

All in all it was a great chapter, update soon plz.

i was thinking about that Q i asked about why V is seemingly content to sacrifice some of his minions, cause i remember him saying that none of his minions are forgotten when that werewolf got caught. But then i remembered that the dementors are serving him so unless they get killed outright in the fight or during interrogation, they'd just be stuffed in a cell and shoved somewhere out of the way, yeah? so, looking at it from V's point of view, they're not really lost, just sort of, being put into storage until he can get around to taking whatever facility they're at, and considering he'll eventually have the ministry anyway, it's not really a loss... did that make sense?

also, side question, construct Har, innocent shell, pseudo har... whatever u want to call him, is he still in effect or has he been swallowed whole and obliterated by har's building rage?

Thanks for the review replies. ^^
I started reading this fic here, then moved over to FFN since that has the update notifications by mail; it's just more practical. But I guess I'll come back over to AFF from now on for every update.
Harry's response to Millie's apology was worth waiting for. As so often with this fic, I'm torn between amusement and disgust. It's really well-written! You're pretty creative, both with the plot and with torture methods.