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September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing writer the fight scene was so exciting to read; I can't wait for more please update again soon.
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September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! It is so much better than most Dark Harry stories that I've read. You really have thought of everything and I just can't wait for the next chapter! I'm glad there are still fanfiction writers out there who actually know how to write and have a plot that they follow and don't just lose all points in response to readers who wont just take what the author has in mind. I really hope you keep writing and I can't wait to see what you have planed for Harry and friends.
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August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting tale you have here. Ginny is definitely disturbing me though *shudder* Loved how Harry got back at Voldemort for his claiming.
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August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm, well, i suppose it doesn't hurt padfoot to indulge a bit from time to time and physical combat is a good way to channel stress and anger.
*mock applauds . Way to go Fawks, how to totally lose your potions master. There are times when death is a mercy and Fawks, (shock, horror) lieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed. :P That's so going to come back and catch him in the neck.
does this mean that dumbles has to haul the fat, smarmy bloke out of retirement now?
Does sev get to keep his scintillating personality or does he become something like a potions brewing zombie now?
"You know what I'm thinking B1?"
"I think I do know what you're thinking B2."
*together "It's snake rescuing time!" ^^
V is indeed in for a very busy month.
*mock applauds . Way to go Fawks, how to totally lose your potions master. There are times when death is a mercy and Fawks, (shock, horror) lieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed. :P That's so going to come back and catch him in the neck.
does this mean that dumbles has to haul the fat, smarmy bloke out of retirement now?
Does sev get to keep his scintillating personality or does he become something like a potions brewing zombie now?
"You know what I'm thinking B1?"
"I think I do know what you're thinking B2."
*together "It's snake rescuing time!" ^^
V is indeed in for a very busy month.
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope you know you are the master of fanfics! And i bow before you!
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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!!! i stumbled upon this story through your newest one and have now spent the last few days reading possession and weapon. I just love this AU and harry's evolution into a powerful leader. i'm looking forward to more updates soon and the realization of harry's 2nd vision. More please!!
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't surprise me that Sev isn't being easy to break. He's a skilled and stubborn man, much good it does him now though.
Xoui huh. How do pronounce that? Yay, that basilisk captives will soon be sprung. I wonder if they'll have much info on Cissa and how did the shadows manage to winkle their way into the manor? I thought i was locked up tight like a bank vault?
yeah, it figures the old goat would send Siri on a wild critter hunt to keep him out of the way. He is so going to pay for that. hmm, that would explain a lot. So, they sort of teach their servants different ways to channel the same magic that they can use in the regular wizarding way? It makes a sort of sense. Magic is a form of energy after all, which is convertible and divertible. Hopefully Siri shouldn't be to hard to teach, especially as he's already done it by instinct.
Just how self aware will be Sev as a shadow minion?
Oh, good. So no one can just wipe out the Dementors. Since they're minions of har, that's a good thing, even if they are vile creatures. would har's shadows be able to kill them apart from 'eating' them? Well, ICK. I hope no one is mad enough to try that method. Not the end I'd wish for that.
Those who's souls are chomped, never get to go to an after life do they? They just cease to exist as if they never were? That isn't a punishment to use lightly.
Xoui huh. How do pronounce that? Yay, that basilisk captives will soon be sprung. I wonder if they'll have much info on Cissa and how did the shadows manage to winkle their way into the manor? I thought i was locked up tight like a bank vault?
yeah, it figures the old goat would send Siri on a wild critter hunt to keep him out of the way. He is so going to pay for that. hmm, that would explain a lot. So, they sort of teach their servants different ways to channel the same magic that they can use in the regular wizarding way? It makes a sort of sense. Magic is a form of energy after all, which is convertible and divertible. Hopefully Siri shouldn't be to hard to teach, especially as he's already done it by instinct.
Just how self aware will be Sev as a shadow minion?
Oh, good. So no one can just wipe out the Dementors. Since they're minions of har, that's a good thing, even if they are vile creatures. would har's shadows be able to kill them apart from 'eating' them? Well, ICK. I hope no one is mad enough to try that method. Not the end I'd wish for that.
Those who's souls are chomped, never get to go to an after life do they? They just cease to exist as if they never were? That isn't a punishment to use lightly.
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August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Neat chapter!
I like the shadows'.. personality, if you can call it that for a group of beings. They are funny sometimes. ^^
It's driving me mad that I can't think of what it is that Sirius is missing! Feels like it should be something obvious from the rest of the story. Hum, maybe I just need to re-read it all again...? *ponders*
Anyway, as always I'm looking forward to more!
- Dime
I like the shadows'.. personality, if you can call it that for a group of beings. They are funny sometimes. ^^
It's driving me mad that I can't think of what it is that Sirius is missing! Feels like it should be something obvious from the rest of the story. Hum, maybe I just need to re-read it all again...? *ponders*
Anyway, as always I'm looking forward to more!
- Dime
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*perks up. Does this mean Fire Dragon will be getting an intro soon? Nice creative use of not to subtle blackmail there Siri. Make the point with a mallet why dontcha mate. :P ... was that a typo? dual (two or double) for duel (arranged fight)?
right, typo two Violation for Volition I'll give you. Easy mistake... i get that one wrong too. >>'
finally the light begins to dawn on dear Cissa. She is a nothing that has nothing to offer in the way of enticement. Not that she won't try anyway, but that's what the delusional do. :D
that's an interesting thought. can a mental landscape be limited or expand exponentially? So Shell Har is still very much in evidence and control?
heh, i wonder how long snape can last before he yields to the inevitable and lets the shadows take him. ^^ The insight into V's mind was interesting too.
Poor, hard up Har. If that's going to happen every time he brushes v's mind, fighting is going to be very interesting. XP
seriously, nicely done though. Oddly enough you don't run across many masturbation scenes in fan fics. Well, not that I've found anyway.
right, typo two Violation for Volition I'll give you. Easy mistake... i get that one wrong too. >>'
finally the light begins to dawn on dear Cissa. She is a nothing that has nothing to offer in the way of enticement. Not that she won't try anyway, but that's what the delusional do. :D
that's an interesting thought. can a mental landscape be limited or expand exponentially? So Shell Har is still very much in evidence and control?
heh, i wonder how long snape can last before he yields to the inevitable and lets the shadows take him. ^^ The insight into V's mind was interesting too.
Poor, hard up Har. If that's going to happen every time he brushes v's mind, fighting is going to be very interesting. XP
seriously, nicely done though. Oddly enough you don't run across many masturbation scenes in fan fics. Well, not that I've found anyway.
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July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mroar! Lovely chapter. ^^
It's confusing though having Sirius working so thoroughly for both sides. (o.0)
- Dime
It's confusing though having Sirius working so thoroughly for both sides. (o.0)
- Dime