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by uqui

schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
goodness, snape is going to be busy. not only is he going to be madly brewing but he's also going to be working accreditation right, left n central. whoa, Fawks really stabbed the order in the hand when he sold out snape. a potions master of his level is not an asset you want in the wind, and that's exactly where snape is. neh, will snape stay a shadow pet after the war is over? also, can Fawks still keep track of sev, whether he's alive and what not? he still does have the phoenix brand after all.

whoa, snape and snuffles interacted without bloodshed... well, i suppose siri is wholly dedicated to har and the shadows so getting along with snape is a minor thing.

le sigh, the vamps are plotting again. >.< when do they not. still, i wonder if the shadows will be content to leave them to it in peace, once they learn of the vampies plans? well, ikans death was sort of an accident. har wasn't even aware through out the attack.

most interesting... lots of review fodder here.
grins. almost a waste leaving the wretch alive wasn't it. lol, hearing kisha and siri go at is pretty entertaining. Still, siri got out with his bits in tact which is more than most cans say going up against her.
sigh, i wonder how many veela there'll be at the end. they're not exactly combat orientated.
hmmm, V's probably going to seriously miss those werewolf troops. still, those branded as his don't have a lot of choice.
siri is still playing the game then, even if kisha doesn't truly buy it, right now she can't disprove it either. how long with siri be able to keep up the guise, especially if har is supposedly able to tame a rogue shadow once it's within eye reach? wouldn't do to tip their hand to early.
So, V will be acting from here on out as though he wishes har to be kept alive if possible, so he can keep him as bed room slave and F toy? good, that will give him far more lee way with his plans while having a viable explanation for kisha... speaking of which, what happened to her two off siders? are they around somewhere?

Also, i'm assuming Bella the vamp has yet to make her way back to the flock, so to speak.
person Saeilfa
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter =D

<3
person Miri Daray
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay a new chapter! I can't wait for the ball to get rolling even more!
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
looks around wide eyed and spots you. *glomp pounce. It's YOU and back with one of my very fave fics. ^^ *beams at you and shakes you gently by the shoulders. I've been meaning to e mail you... you know, just to poke you gently and see if you're still alive n such.
anywho, enough socializing. this chappie has given me one of my very fave things... review fodder.
heh, so snape got his way after all. when har fights it will be with style. :P
will we get more from sev soon? V really gave him a working over.
interesting... so vampy guy AND draco both know and theres nothing to stop the pair collaborating. Even if inconvenient details keep draco's mouth shut atm, theres still nothing to stop him with fangs now that he can talk about it. that's what the bat said yeah? come to me when you can talk about it? that could be a most irritating partnership.
*blinks... that's ambitious. i can appreciate har not wanting to bring in an outside source, but would that even work? i suppose it depends on the type of light. a larger flame can take a smaller flame and swallow it, causing it to cease and become part of the greater... but while light in general might drown out the effects of a weaker light, it doesn't stop it from being. I look forward to seeing how you swing that if yyou decide to run with it.
boooo. har has to make nice, nice with gin gin again and he SO loves doing that. >> still, needs to keep his fem meat shield happy, at least for now.

*blinks... well, does this mean dear cissa is having doubts after all ('bout fekking time!) or is she merely covering all her bases and preparing for the worst should it come to pass?

ah remi... sighs. he's such an honourable bloke. even when the twat in office is a total meat head. sighs for madam bones. she's a good person, really she is. if she were running the joint, i'm betting she'd be well on her way to clearing out some of the clutter and snipping the dead branches.
Still, ministries loss... idiot.

there there, blackpelt, there's worse fates than becoming the pack leaders pa. ^^

Oh...Wow... sucks hardcore to be gids. there's a promotion i would've joyously handed back and grabbed some other poor pleb to play messenger... V isn't know for his grace on taking bad news well... messengers do tend to get shot now n then. *winces. still, as long as he keeps his head down n does what he's told, he may just survive the job. need so seriously steely nerves though... maybe he can fake the confidence till he makes it... or not.
better him than me, that's all i can say.
hope he doesnt keep that nugget to himself to long. i imagine v takes a dim view to those who with hold info.
person BAFan
schedule November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 82. Whew! It's a relief to know that Harry is aware of Draco's breaking the Solmemorate (?) charm. I was so happy to see another update for this story ; hope another chapter will appear soon.
person Stacy
schedule November 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Horrid. Quit writing.
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YAY! *bounces, update! it's been soooooooooooo long!
whoa, blinks... so, does this mean draco has finally managed to lose the Solmem spell, or just loosen it a great deal? What about his shadow coating, are they still attached and if not, will har learn of it. can't have blondie there roaming around flapping his lips at inopportune times... though it would give har a nifty excuse to kill the vamp.

thestral's huh. well, i suppose they are an interesting study and since this fic has diverged from canon a great deal, har never got to use them in a rescue flight. this way he can get to know and know of them under more controlled circumstances.

oh, wow, that really is a serious over site there Cissa. that's practically giving the dark lord a free 'in' to her home whenever he pleases. it'd be just stupidity leaving that in place especially as cissa has to know who bella is loyal too. not thinking things through hard core. i mean, sure bell bells might be a bit unsure in her loyalty atm but not so unsure that she'd balk at her lords request. and now that they know who was responsible for basalisk death, that's just one more strike against silly cissa and her deluded off spring.
schedule September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And mooney stands triumphant as we all knew he would. Yay for human guile and wolf cunning.
Vol-die's gonna be pi-isssed *sing song. Good thing Grayback died in that debacle or V would've crucioed the prick to death himself for that failure. he doesn't take failure lightly and losing control of all the lycan's in Briton counts as a pretty epic failure. :P
Guess he's going to have to re jiggle his plans pretty sharply since the wolves are now totally for the shadows, bet on it.
person Miri Daray
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Go Lupin! Love the way you wrote the battle!
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods above yes!!!! My wolves chapter!!!!! I absolutely adore it. Completely and totally. You mixed the wolf side and human side of Remus quite well, and the comparisons between him and the other wolves were great! It's too bad we don't get to see Greyback bow to Remus but his death is an acceptable exchange. I can't wait for Harry's reaction, not to mention Sirius! See you next chapter!
~Pen