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by uqui

person kieran
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must admit I was wary when I first started reading "Possession" but now I find myself panting for more. The plot is complicated enough to keep me guessing. You have managed to cast some of my favorite Slytherins in an awful light or have eliminated completely but I am still in love with this story. I even find myself not minding the need for me mentally auto-grammar check more than I would normally accept. Truly beautiful and your Lord Voldemort is the Dark Lord at his best- tender but no fluff in sight. Please don't let this drop; it's too good to leave unfinished.

p.s. I am only going to make one gripe and it is that if you do continue you; I am fairly certain that parseltongue is spelled with a 's' and I am constantly getting stuck on that one tiny error. My flaw I know but I tought I would mention it.
person Jemma
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brill story. I read Possession as well and that was really good too, The story is complex and keeps you guessing and on your toes. PLease update soon.
person meikouhaikitsune
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O I read ALLLLLLLLLLL that in One sitting and when I say all I mean Weapon AND Possesion. My ass hurts XD. >.< How do you describe in a review the heights of your *points to you* story *glares*? It was sooo go, well so far, because obviously it isn't over. I can't wait for the next chapter. The shadows rock. I've never seen something so original. Honestly. A lot of people may say that, but this is the first time I've even seen something CLOSE to a story of this poportions. O.O I really really like it and it does help that its our favourite couple LVHP lol Wick Job update soon?
person Mey
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Agh, pleaseeee... post again TT_____TT... pleeeeease
person Mey
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, this is the best male/male HP fic I've ever read!!!
It's incredible how well you managed to fit the new plot into the HP universe, not to mention the fact that there's not a single person out of character (I mean, yeah, Harry changed quite a lot, but since the changes are supported by a sucess in his life, it's comprehensible).
I hate fics where amazingly, everybody turns out to be gay... of course, I love yaoi touches in storyes, such as this one, where there is a coulpe of guys in love (or maybe 2 couples... dunno if I catched the relationship between Sirius and Lupin right)... but I really hate those where EVERYONE seems to magically become homosexual for no reason... I believe changes must be supported by something not just "Hey, you know Albus, I was thinking I just might turn to the dark side... got too much free time you see..."
I also liked very much how the argument is developing, how all ties are getting knotted together not to leave a single thread out. Though I must admitt I don't quite like the tenshi concept yet (it's too weird in my opinion), the story is marvelous!!!!!
Well, always keep in mind it's just my humble opinion, but... you are a hell of a writer ^____^
Please, keep on posting chapters cuz I'm dying to see the moment when Harry turns back to Dumbledore and says "Surpriiiiiise"
Hope to read you soon, Mey.
person Wilder
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. ther idea itself is unique and interesting and your ability to tell the tale is awe inspiring really. the story just flows in a believable manner, drawing you in for more. i started reading possession 2 days ago and now i finished weapon, and i can't wait for the next chapter! i have to complement you on your lemon scenes as well. they are tastefully done, and i want to just keep on reading! Looking forward to continued greatness!
person Angel no Yami
schedule February 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read this fic and possesion 3 times now...and i still love it. Your writing is amazing and the story is awesome and most certainly one of the best examples of Fanfiction out there on the web. Please keep up the wonderful work and i look forward to the next chapter. Please e-mail me if you can I would love to get direct contact with you, rather than leave reviews constantly, not that you mind.
Angel no Yami
person GML
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*grin* Excelent chaps. *smirk* Everything adding up is going to make the one instant when Harry shows his true colors all the more delicious. Great chaps! More Please! ASAP!
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic so be sure to update soon!
person TyRisha
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm not sure if i reviewed this chapter already. at any rate, please continue ASAP. it's fabulous as always and i can't wait to see what happens next.