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Good to see that Harry has been so successful at blocking Fawkes from reading his true intentions. Wonder if Madame Bones can be persuaded to be neutral, but I doubt it. She does seem a rather nice lady. Another wonderful chapter, and its good to see Harry sidestepping Dumbledore and getting his truth out and not the half version Dumbledore usually wants.

Voldi really wasn't doing himself any fav's letting fen approach the wolves. GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Remi! *waves flag in the background.
lol, poor siri. Still, not much longer old son.
I wonder what the diaries are for. ah well, soon find out neh? i'm with voldi. putting things over the vamp chika is lots of fun and the shadows play very well indeed.
Will they snap up snape soon? He's pretty much jumping out of his skin as is.
anywho, ty for answering my earlier Q's. ^^

Oh interesting, I seem to say that a lot don't I? Anyway, I like how Remus seems to have the unknown advantage; also getting a chance to take his revenge on Greyback is fitting. Sirius forgot about dragons?! Shameful! (LOL sorry, I'm a dragon fanatic so to overlook such a large group is blasphemous! LOL!) I like how the Shadows are playing the Vampire, and only Voldie is the wiser. Another wonderful chapter, and I anxiously await the next! Will that one have the werewolf fight?

Leania

Wow, finally caught up having to read both stories; must say its very well done! I've enjoyed it thus far, and I'm curious to see how everything pans out. Sounds like Ron is matured (or at least progressing in that manner), Hermionie was okay with following Harry but after that Shadow whisper she's questioning. Ginny, >.< clingy, and getting her hopes up. I remember the 'dream' and there were 3 people in the chairs, one was Voldie, one was Harry, but something tells me the third is either Luna or Neville. I just never see Ginny working out properly; but I'm sure you've already got everything planned out. Good job so far, and keep up the good work. I await the next chapter!

Leania

Yeah, i thought har 'got over' his childhood way to fast. childhood abuse isn't something you just 'get over' there's a back log of emotional crap to deal with too. It needs venting, and channeling and support... and that's what dumbles doesn't understand and that's going to cost him hard core. You'd think he'd pick up on that a bit considering what his sister suffered.
At any rate, at least har has his shadows, his pad foot and his beloved, even ginny too, who will support him come what may.

I'm a bit confused about rabi and rudi though. I thought v killed those who answered wrong dead? or did they end up as dementor fodder? *goes back to re read it and see if i can understand it better.

at any rate, the Goblins are munted and, at the end, i imagine there's going to be as few of them as there are vampires left. though, i'm sure there's a use there species is suited to. A place for everyone and everyone in their place, neh?

poor gin. i still feel incredibly sorry for her. It might be better to have her die dramatically thought atm she's the only one who knows the whole truth... and doesn't care. it just seems a waste to toss that by the way side.
anyway, heh, lol. like all those candles would make a difference. it's interesting that the shadows can give them mostly the truth and dumbles and crew, because of their mind set, still won't draw the real answers from it. I do hope they can corrupt fawks before har shows his real colours. Fawks is no light opponent. does kali regret being shadow converted, would he have fought it? Is fawks likely to do the same? does a being like that whose forcibly converted bring it's own unique talents with it or is it subsumed while the conversion is happening.
I wonder if X t vamp will dies as well? I can't see voldi, the shadows OR har leaving someone that knowledgeable about them around? does that mean they'd have to take out his sire and off spring as well?
one more side Q? Bella likely to cause trouble once she learns of voldi's mate? she's rather obsessive and possessive yeah?

Now I get the shadows much more, I think the explanation of them and their agenda( if I can phrase it that way) makes them into a real characterin the story, once again I must say I do love the story and the writing that you do and will avidly await the next chapter .

hmmmm I've been following this all along but have only just joined AFF so this is my first review, I am enjoyin it but am not sure about the shadows , although they are a wonderful idea you seem to rely on them alot for a simple plot device, think of this as constructive critism as I do think the story adn your writing is brilliant.

i'm glad that charm worked, it'll make things much better for the wolves.
I thought mio and his friends knew about his shadow powers... but then again there's but so much going on it's hard to remember whose in the know and who isn't... though i'm clinging firmly to that potential future vision where mio and ron are happy at hogwarts and har rules from elsewhere than having his friends reject him... at least until i know otherwise. >>
About time har learned of oli and cissa's feathered extra's though if there are other basalisc held at the manor will har pass the info on to voldi or ask the shadows to get them out?

blinks... good luck with that old hat. I doubt you'll get har to pop u on now. the hat might feel obliged to squawk to the head master.
heh, poor sev. phoenix tat or not, he's not going to win this.
I can feel a bit sorry for gin. just another witch indeed. maybe har can turn her affections elsewhere with a spell or something. to someone who'll actually love and care for her as she should be loved and cared for.
so many plans in the air. so many works in plan. which ones will come to fruition i wonder... and i'm still hanging to find out who fire dragon is? :P