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....You almost made me cry. I felt so bad for Draco and for Charlie. Very well written. You portray Draco so well. :3 Excellent fic with poignant emotion.

I\'m only on Chpt. 3 of this story, and I\'m sad TT_TT It\'s very hard to make me feel sad whether through books or movies, and you did it in simply 3 chapters. That alone should give you pride, because it means you are a wonderful writer. Gawd, I need to keep on reading...There\'s so much I have to comment on! How very in character your Draco is, and how utterly sad he makes me feel. He can\'t let go of Harry (I\'m still not over his death T-T), and now that Charlie\'s his substitute...This isn\'t much of a review, but I felt I had to say something..Now I\'m off to read chapter 4! >0<

Crap. There isn\'t a chapter 4...TT_TT Please update soon!!!!!!!

Awww, angsty Draco. Poor thing. Or not! I fell sorry for Charlie, he just want some love. Poor thing.
Hmm- Deja vu.
ANyway, please update soon.

I know it\'s weird. But I liked that Draco couldn\'t give up on Harry.
It would just seem wrong for him to move forwards. I liked your story
even though it made me kind of sad. That love.... ^.^\'

In much the same way that portraits and the map are left in the magical world after the witch or wizard has passed on, the marks/tattoos retain a piece of who Harry was. Of course, unlike a portrait, a human being can die, and so the mark would die with them.

what a sad sad story!! it\'s like he\'s not even living... well, he is but there\'s the fact that he\'s obviously not over harry and then poor charlie.... he, omg... it\'s just really sad but i really like your story!! the stag and dragon part are cool, good idea!! but how come draco still has the stag anyway??

I\'m a HUGE Charlie Weasley fan. He\'s my fav of all the Weasley men. But to make him suffer, loving a person who is turning him into his dead lover is so mean. I know as an author we do what we must to characters, but it kind of hurts to think of Charlie miserable like that. I can\'t wait to see how this one turns around.

Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

Trix

hm. That one leaves me feeling thoughtful. It was well written, well constructed, but sad. I want Charlie to be happy. Hell, I even want Draco to be happy. And they\'re not. hm. I\'ll have to ponder this.

Ohhhhh this is veary good i hope theay get along lovr this paring and theres never any around update when you can