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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is great so far! i can\'t wait to read more. I actually really liked chapter 3. The fact that Hermione saved Draco made me happy... too often its the male who saves the female, and I thought it was a very appropriate rescue. i also like the fact that draco remains dark, angry, and mean. he\'s had a very rough time of it of late, and it would be too unrealistic to have him immediately fall in love (or lust) with hermione. this is evidenced as well by the fact that you have him reluctant and unwilling to accept his attraction to her. one small criticism, i really would have liked chapter 4 to have been longer, but that\'s only because i\'m impatient to read more :) thanks for updating, and i\'m looking forward to another one.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon sweetie! It\'s great! And of course Hermione would help him! NO matter what! She\'s just that kind of person. Like in the POA, she rushed to Hagrid, telling him Draco HAD to go to the hospital. Then worrying about if he\'s ok?! Go Hermione. Update soon sweetie I love it!
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:):) waiting for the next chapter!
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too short! Too short!
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
//Jump//Jump// This what m talking about!!! Great!
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very good! when i was reading it i reminded me of something JK would write for her next book. Keep up the good work!
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liek it a lot... i cant wait for more
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going. It sounds good! Please update soon. :)
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m really enjoying this story so far. i like the way you have portrayed draco, it is a very realistic characterization of his canon self. it is exactly the way i would have pictured him. i can\'t wait to see what heppens! please update soon.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice Start. I\'m interested to see where you go with this.