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WTF!!!!!!!! wow THAT was by far the scariest thing I ever read but good

all i have to say is WTF!!! WTF!!! WTF!!!

No one should ever publish their very first story, trust me. There is a little something Anne Lamott likes to call the \"shitty first draft.\" The shitty first draft is not meant to be shown to anyone. You need to learn about editing and grammar. Just because you want to write a story doesn\'t mean you should share it without first cleaning it up. You absolutely MUST learn how to punctuate and create legible sentences. If you ignore the basic rules of English and writing, you will simply show the world your lazy first draft. If you don\'t care enough about the story to fix it and make it its best before publishing it, no one else will care about it, either. And to the person defending you, you do this writer a great disservice! First story it may well be, but that does not mean that we should all congratulate him for simply stringing words together.

Shut the $#%$ up you stupid wanker, it\'s his first f-ing story.

Maybe you should leave this site for being an apsolute asshole.

This is a really great story. You\'ve got good plot, dialogue, and script. Keep up your wonderful writing skills!

This has to be the most perfect story I have ever read on this site! It is clearly obvious that you have a lot of sexual experience to be able to write sex scenes so thoroughly and with such a variety of terms! It it amazes me that a writer of your maturity isn\'t off writing something that\'ll turn into the Great American Novel! Whoever your Beta is deserves kudos as well for keeping your spelling, grammar, and dialogue so real! I could just see the scenes unfolding! I never read anything this good before. And writing Ron\'s name as ROn is one of those things that will surely change fandom! I\'m sure if JK Rowling read this, she\'d give up writing, knowing she could never equal it! You are living proof the one does not need to know English, punctuation, spelling, characterization, or have a plot in order to write! I am just so amazed and impressed by you! Dyslexics around the world should sit up and take notice -- this surely is an inspiration to them! I highly recommend this story is being the nadir of writing. I would advise you to quit your job at McDonald\'s tonight and dropped out of high school! You clearly don\'t need either with your talent!