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for I Didn\'t See It Coming

by PhoenixRae

person Anon
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no! i was so upset not to find another chapter after witnessing draco give hermione the cold shoulder! please please update soon. i\'m curious to see what happens between the two, and if draco is actually going to go through with this. i also hope you will introduce other characters into the mix. have hermione and ron noticed anything strange about hermione\'s behaviour? has hermione told ginny about her relationship? what about the slytherins? i think adding other reactions and relationships (not romantic, but friendly) would add more depth to your story. i can\'t wait to read more!

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person semperputus
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean dunno when ????? How can you do this it\'s mean creul and just plain mean update soon as this is great thanks
person FoxFireDemoness
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I am just speechless. I love this fic it has the right amount of sensuality, well that and the sex, sex, SEX Please update
person Apollonia
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story already. I love it when Hermione and Draco tyr the sex-without-attachments deal but end up having feelings for one another. And Lucius wouldn\'t have a problem with Draco cavorting with her as long as he didn\'t get serious with her, but, of course, that\'s what\'s happening. Hehe. I can\'t wait to see the rest of this story. Please update soon! :)
person lilil
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:):) Like it! Update soon
person dracodea
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!! sorry for reveiwing again, but i just wanted to say ur fic is NOT ooc \'cause my previous reveiw might\'ve sounded like it was. It\'s just that i\'ve read tons of fics where everything becomes so fluffy and ooc after a certain point in the fic.
person carrie
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story, please continue.
person caliko
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYYY!!! Oh, that was GOOOD! I love this pairing! heheheheh.. Draco was adorable,and Hermione was cute! and the sex! hehehehehehe.. an A-bomb could have gone off and I wouldn\'t notice! I was that into it! ~Caliko
person Jess
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue you this! It was so good, i loved it. update soon!!! =)
person dracodea
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! You really should continue with this, but can the characters not be too ooc.