rate_review Reviews

Good start. The love-making needs a little work, as do your transitions from one story line/location to another, but otherwise it\'s good. I\'m intrigued, do go on. :)

i want u 2 put hermione with draco


pls email me when u update! (tell me the name of ur fic and where it is, or ill 4get)

Interesting...I sail the Hermione and Snape ship, but I also find that I kind of like stories where Snape turns out to be Hermiones\' father or uncle.....very good first chapter....let me guess the college student is either Hermiones\' brother or uncle?

Pretty good beginning, liked the way Severus had had the memory stored in a pensieve, also thought your descriptive writing (such as
Hermione being at Cambridge) was very good.

Curious to know what Severus knows, and also who the young man is. Think from description he\'s a Malfoy.
Please update soon, will be watching out.

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