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OMG, I loooove it! all of the tension building up into that one moment... Ahhhh I cant wait for an update to see what will happen, now that they know who they are.

umm good story but could you please take out all the symbols in the last chapter. Kindof made it hard to read,,, Other than that great story and I love Hermione\'s reaction to Severus being her father. I was taken by surprise that Regan is a Weasley and it is Charlie,, Love it please update soon.

I\'d say at the Burrow, but that\'s mainly because I\'m dying for them to meet.

Love the story and have been following it. Please update soon.

they should meet up againa nd get attacked by a death eater

they both fight and their identities are revealed

i think b would be the best. really good story by the way.

Another great chapter. Thank you for taking care of the animosity between Draco and Hermione early on in the story. Something tells me she is going to have enough problems without my favorite ferret troubling her. (no offense towards Draco implied, absolutley love the blonde Malfoy(s) Lucius is indeed luscious, is he not?) I\'m also incredibly glad to see Severus still uncomfortable with displays of affection. That\'s the snarky potions master we all know and love.

Now, I\'m not sure if it is my computer or not, but the formatting on chapter 5 was a tad screwy. the commas, quotation marks and apostrophes came out as \"iK!\" on my screen. Don\'t know if that is aff.net messing up, or just my computer, but thought I\'d let you know in case anyone else mentions it.

Now, for Reagan and Madeline meeting. I don\'t think it should be soon. That bit of suspense should be kept, in my humble opinion. Other than that, I can only offer how I invsioned it happening: possibly around Christmas break during an Order meeting. Again, just my opinion, it would be incredibly angsty for him to discover her in the dungeons, especially in Snape\'s quarters; and to discover it during the final battle could really pave the way for intense character death scenes. Whatever you decide will be fabulous, I\'m sure.

I look forward to the next intriguing installment!

Taa.

Zoltaire the Inscrutable

So far, it\'s great. There aren\'t enough CW/HG and/or BW/HG and or CW/HG/BW (non-incest) out there for my taste. I like the story-line. It\'s amazing to me how many ideas seem so obvious when you think about them, but most people just don\'t. For instance, it only makes sense that Order members would have aliases for Order business. The problem is, thinking of something so simple. A lot of writers grasp so hard at an idea, ANY idea, just hoping that it will be close to original.

You\'ve done a great job with this. I\'m eager to see how Charlie and Hermione react to seeing each other at the Burrow, or if they had been disguised somewhat as \'Reagan\' and \'Madeline.\' I would ask if there is any way to use *** or another type of divider of some sort in between scene changes. Other than that, this is great!

Is it possible to get story updates? FF.net has the \'Story Alert\' and \'Author Alert\' features, but I couldn\'t find any on aff.net.

Keep up the Great Work.
Zoltaire the Inscrutable

Very promising!! Can\'t wait to read more! Pls pls pls keep updating!!

i love it!!! More Please

Terrific! I am really enjoying this. Can\'t wait to see where it is going! :D