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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, my name is my username for www.fanfiction.net , if you were laughing at my funny name. I think your story is really good, and I'm thinking it would be unteresting if ron tried to rape hermione, but Charlie stopped her and Snape found out what ron did! Sorry, but i just hate ron in most fanfictions if he acts like, well, himself.
Your Lord and Master,
Chippy the Chipmunk
Your Lord and Master,
Chippy the Chipmunk
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great i love it .. hmm that is charlie and snape going to do about mayla .. i hope there is more sev and rosalyn .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
angel
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi avanell, thanks for the review of 'hermione's little secret' i'm sorry about my last comment on here. it's a GREAT STORY first of all. when i meant redoing earlier chapters, i meant maybe the ones where the quotation marks for dialogue. it's a little difficult to read. it was proably something that happened by the site, heaven knows it's buggered me enough! but, it's your story, and like i said in my author's note to my favorite flamer, we're here for fun and enjoyment. and i do enjoy your stories.
until next time
marti
until next time
marti
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn that Mayla! On one habd, I want her to go back to wherever it was she came from, but on the other I can completely understand the need for there to be onstacles and all that shit, so log as its now on soap opera proportions... that's just insane.. but I digress. Wonderful chapter and have a nice day!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That Mayla is something lol. and Lol Hermione and Charlie are just sooo cute. more more please. Please update soon.
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi avanell, great story....a couple chapters, though, you might consider fixing and resubmitting, quite difficult to read. Probably some formatting problem during the upload. I can't wait for the next chapter!
until next time
marti
until next time
marti
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Someone is VERY perceptive on what happens in the next chapter ;)
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! for your next chapter suggestion if you din't mind: what if marla walks in on charlie and hermionw after the order meeting? anyways keep up the great work, I really like this fic!
:oP
:oP
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
arg!! noooo..this was getting good too...lord..i need to read more its getting all juicy and stuff..O_o..i mean good lmao well i can't wait to read more ^_^
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Any thoughts on how Mayla should find out who Charlie's girlfriend is?"
How about at wand point? Anyway, thanks for updating your story. It's very enjoyable.
How about at wand point? Anyway, thanks for updating your story. It's very enjoyable.