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Wow, so many plot twists to follow! Keep the chapters coming! I'm hanging onto a cliff here!

so the malfoys are good? it would be nice if they were! lol
awesome story, can't wait for more

i can't wait for more. is mayla a death eater? cuz i hate her! update soon

I Love this story. i noticed that you read the hg/dm story where hg is a zambini. you said it was posted somewhere else. would you mind telling me where? its really good and to be honest i dont think i can wait for updates. thaank you and keep writting!

I Just hope whats her face The evil veela gets her throat slit i hate her! i hope snape catches on to what shes brewing and squashes her like a bug!!!!! Ah i hate her!
I love the face that Snape is actually being portayed as an ok guy. Granted hes still a butt head in the books but seeing a different side of him is nice. And the fact the draco's dad seems to be working with Snape here is awesome. I love when bad guys are really good.
I also realize that this is a HG/CW fic but harry seems to be AWOL for most of the story, its odd in a way because he's suppose to be bringing the doom down upon He-who-must-not-be-named's head and hes like a phantom in the story, Oh well im sure you have a plan. So...
Back to the evil B*tch, i really really hope that snape charlie and Hermione are sharp enough to catch the evil c*nt before she gets to go through with her evil plan. I really hate her! I would cry is charlie and hermione breack up because of that evil wench! GOD I HATE HER! You really made her character well. I hate her so much its ridiculous.
Good job really! Well done! i can't wait until you post again.

as I continue to get more and more drunk while reading this story(literally), I cant help but wonder if mayla is a deatheater incogneto.....I really wish someone would kick her ass hardcore....to the soundtrack!

I love this story!!!! I was so happy to see that you had updated!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

I'm loving this story. It is one of the first Hermione/Charlie stories I've read but I'm definately starting to like the pairing.

I really like your story and am impressed with Snape being Hermione's father, that is a creative angle to the the Snape and Hermione connection. I hope Hermione will help Draco not become a deatheater. You did a good job making Mayla annoying. I hope her attempts are thwarted by a very intelligent Hermione Granger. I did kind of want to see Severus threaten Charlie for dating his daughter, but I like your way of having him casually test him better. It keeps with Snape's calm, emotionless, rational, intelligent disposition. I have noticed a very common theme with most of the fanfiction dealing with Hermione. She always procrastinates on telling Harry and Ron of things she knows they will not accept easily. I am getting rather board with this, especially if you think of their characters interplay. Hermione would always tell Ginny first (confiding in the girl and also the girl that can help with dealing with Ron and Harry) and then Hermione would tell Harry and Ron next. So often in the fan-fics I have been reading 'Mione waits until they blow up or never actually tells them her secrets. I am glad of the subplot of Severus and Hermione's mother it should help with him opening up with his daughter, that was a very tactical and impressive way to approach the changes that Snapes character was going to have to make. Thank You! I am dying for the next chapter!

-Myth

what happens next? i started reading this thinking it was complete but i am only regretting that it isnt because i am dying to know what is next. please update soon!