AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Obscurity

by brandnewdaydawning

person Norah
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've noticed a lot of little mistakes in character behavior and stuff like that.
I try not to let it bother me.



I love this story so much.
person demonika
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! Draco and Hermione are such NERDS in that conversation....
.....
....
....
...
...
...I LOVE IT!!!!!
person Parva_Larva
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG.. I have never EVER read a fanfic this fast.. How can I not have discovered this before? Anyway I love it!! Your potrait of both Draco and Hermione is so real, not counting the fact that it would never happen, I just adore it! Hermione is maybe a little bit too manic schoolwise but you still make it believeable.. And for the first time (in a long time) I actually miss not having a boyfriend, someone to care for me like that! I'm really close to saying you should just continue writing no matter what happens plotwise but seriously, no.. never mind.. just continue the story, I can't even write a comprehendable sentence anymore, so just update, please, and know you have my full support (and readership), even if it's not worth much!
person Given2fly
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update. More. NOW!!!!!!!!! LoL








Please? =P
person DeceptiveInnocence
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Draco/Hermione fics I've read, I love the way Draco acts with her! Very sexy! Keep updating!
person Empress
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I almost by-passed this fic. I'm so glad I stopped though. It held me with its creative writing, solid plot and with a Hermoinie and Draco that weren't OOC. You made them a little sexier and your adaptation was very believable. All around good story.


I look forward to reading more of your work and the updates to this story.
You have created a fan.
person amoraluv
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
totally hot!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person ozarkmoon
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You said in Author's Notes at the end of Chapter 2 you included the Twin Towers as a recent event. That occured 9/11/2001 and by then Hermione, Draco, Harry - et all in that year class - would be 21 or so. A more timely reference for them would be the first Gulf War or Tianamen Square, since they started school in 1990 or 1991 and Hermione is what? 16 or nearly 17 (now in the summer before her last year at school)? making it 1997 or so.
person sheedy
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome work! I look forward to your next update.
person Leeree [not logged in]
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! This is getting good!

~Leeree a.k.a. weirdo bitch whore (inseid joke with my friend Cerenna :D)