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by brandnewdaydawning

person Anon
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story so far! i thought the little scenes you added about hermione and draco throughout the years was a very nice touch, and added some realism to the idea that these two could be together. i hope you update soon, i\'m looking forward to reading more :)

nnt
person Ana
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Screams* What a wonderful piece of literature! Please E-mail me when you next update.
person Nicole
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is like my fav story I hope you right more alot more like making thi a 40 chap story LOL
person Kyrian
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo...tell me theres gonna be more! please! that was bloody delicious! draco was just...mmmm
niceness
person Anon
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was sooooo good. please update soon
person yanely1167
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is not as long as others i have read but it doesn\'t matter because this one chapter is better then some of those stories. I can\'t wait till you update to this story hopfully sooner then later.
person slytherinswn
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I smell a hot and wild story in the brew and I can\'t wait for more
person Hanna Delacour
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m on the edge of my seat! I love it! Please update again, like right now would be good! Can\'t wait!
person eve/roarke
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When I get to read opening (?) chapters like this, then I have to say I LOVE PLOT BUNNIES.

Is this a one shot or are you going to continue? Brilliantly wrote with just a hint of acidic flavour at the end. Please continue
I think its got the makings of a hell of a fanfic.
person Bambu
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco\'s crisis of conscience, rather his conflicting loyalty is very nicely depicted in this would-be one-shot. I can see why you don\'t leave the story at this juncture... it\'s just not quite finished. The tenderness between them is so surprisingly in character in this little piece that it\'s like a diamond in the rough, multi-faceted if only you look through the right loup. I look forward to the next part.