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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! It\'s so sexy, and they haven\'t really done anything yet except talk, kiss, and touch. And your Draco, so sexy and snarky. I just love that he\'s so protective of Hermione.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update dammit! hehe
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eheh that was awesome!
I hope you are still gonna finish this story, as it is VERY awesome!
I give it 110% \'cause I love it that much!
I love the banter between Draco and Hermione, it\'s so cute! ^__^
Draco\'s got it BAAAAD....so does Hermoine, but she doesn\'t really realize it yet.
Your writing style is awesome and I hope you keep it up.
-bob
I hope you are still gonna finish this story, as it is VERY awesome!
I give it 110% \'cause I love it that much!
I love the banter between Draco and Hermione, it\'s so cute! ^__^
Draco\'s got it BAAAAD....so does Hermoine, but she doesn\'t really realize it yet.
Your writing style is awesome and I hope you keep it up.
-bob
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You made Draco so HOT! I love his portrayal and the he he keeps teasing by backing away. YOu left me in suspence, I can\'t wait for an update! <3
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How i LOVE this story. There is such passion between the two characters. I love Draco and how you portrayed him. I love the dialog. I love the way the story is going. I would love to be Hermione at this point....to have my very own savior!!! Your writing is off the hook! Such a pleasant style that is like music to my ear. Now only if my writing was like yours....lol. Well UPDATE SOON!
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this the other day and then I couldn\'t find it again. So I searced like mad and now I\'ve found it. I adore this story. The plot bunnies that are wandering around are amazing. Please do update soon, I\'m on the edge of my seat with anticipation!! D:
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, you killed the story the second you mentioned \'Janice\' and \'Leslie\'. You don\'t include your own friends in a story just out of nowhere and just for the sake of it. The club was \'hopping?\' C\'mon, what the hell is that? Instead of working the personality and thought patterns of the characters, you simply ignore them. That sure as hell wasn\'t Hermione. Do us all a favor, and stop writing. If not, take a class, or get yourself a beta-reader. You need one very badly.
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice. this is one of the best fics i\'ve ever read. please keep it going.
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m loving it. Keep it going.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the premise and thinks it shows promise- has Draco been leading a double life since he was eleven? But unfortunately I find Hermione too out of character. We know that her first reaction when in doubt is too research yet in your fic her academic pursuits hardly exist. Personality-wise this feels more like a Ginny/Draco fic than a Hermione Draco.