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by brandnewdaydawning

person Michelle
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your an excellent writer and the there is some great plot involved. Keep updating!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I say... I love it!!!! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT! I love the plot and I am sorry that you had a personal tragedy as it were, I hope things are better now. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I hope it is sooner, but well worth the wait.
person Lisa
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. Please continue it!
person Avanell
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Things keep getting more and more interesting...from that first time to now with the red sheets. Love it! One complaint, however: I really want Hermione to show she can kick some ass! Please let her! And THEN she can enjoy twisted games with the sheets ;)
person julie
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story, it really keeps my attention. altough this draco might seem ooc from time to time...i really like the \"comforting\" side of him. aw who wouldnt wanna be wrapped up in his arms. lol
person Rosie
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think I\'ve ever stumbled upon a Draco/Hermione fic still set in school that actually had such amazing character development and plot. I almost feel as if I\'m reading an You\'re an extremely talented writer, and aside from the complete OOCness of ANY Draco/Hermione fic, I think you\'re doing a beautiful job at actually portraying the characters as someone else laid them out. I find this amazing, and I can\'t stop thinking how awesome this is, because I certainly can\'t do it, and I don\'t know many people that can. You\'re a truly talented writer, and I look forward to reading a lot of your work.
person Rosie
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t you love how the board decides to leave out complete chunks of your comment?

Read as: It almost feels like I\'m reading a Harry Potter book, with different author quirks.
person Narcissa Black
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would agree that once you save someone\'s life, a bond that cannot be broken is formed. I have almost drowned in the ocean twice, saved by members of my family. I mean really almost drowned, started not caring and just wanted to give up against the current. (I know, why do they still let me swim, but they occurred 10 years apart.) Even if we don\'t talk about it, that bond is there. Draco has saved her more than once in your story, and I don\'t find this OOC at all. Don\'t let the bastards get you down.
person Lala
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv the story and i don\'t see anything wrong with it except that u have a habit of crossing from 2 places without anything in between. but other than that, the story is perfect. i\'ll be on the look out for updates.
person Brit
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bollocks! Of course there\'s a minimum drinking age. Trust me, its 18 in London just like everywhere else in the UK. That\'s 18 to buy alcohol, 14 to drink it in a restaurant or pub with a meal if somone else buys it. However, as with anywhere, underage drinking is prevalent because of bad security letting people into clubs just cause they\'re wearing short skirts and low cut tops - that\'s the girls obviously! Apart from that - great story.