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This has to be one of the best Draco/Hermione fics I've ever read (and those are the ONLY ones I read...lol). You have a gift for writing that few in this world do, and I can't WAIT to see what happens next!

At moments I felt weak in the knees, breathless. This is the second story of yours that I have read and what can I say? You have a talent for creating those special moments where when reading your story, I get butterflies in my stomach, as if what you wrote was happening to me. Simply amazing.

I really enjoyed reading this story so far! I find it a bit appalling that Hermione regards her safety so insubstantially. I know she's a target already before she started S.T.O.P. because she was Harry Potter's best friend and just simply being Muggle-born. But seriously, she should at least take some sort of precautions...I find it surprising that Hermione hasn't [i]heard[/i] of brand names before. I mean, she lives with Parvarti and Lavender as dorm mates! I'm sure she could have heard them talking about it...doesn't Harry have the Marauder's Map? Isn't it a bit risky because Harry might see them together on the map? Also, you seem to have mixed up "strait" when you really mean to use "straight." But this is a lovely story and I hope you'll update soon!

Great chapter. I haven't seen this fic in a while so had to reread it again. It didn't disappoint!

I am so glad that you are continuing!!!! I really enjoy this story, love how you portray Draco, and Hermione. One question though, when you wrote: " People were uniformed and it led to uniformed choices". Did you mean uninformed?? Because it could work either way. Just wanted to point it out. Again, I'm really really happy with you continuing Obscurity and Jealousy!!!

wow i love this view on draco/hermione... a very different twist to what we normally read.... and you got right to the good stuff in the first chap very nice so i am looking forward to reading on....

Hey, this is very nicely written. I like how protective Malfoy is, and possesive at the same time . . . mmm.

Rain,

Thank you for updating this story. It is my favorite Draco/Hermione fan fic by far. This chapter is certainly as poignant as the other eleven, and holds a gripping fascination that keeps me intrigued. I love how you are writing this story in close third to Hermione's character, allowing us to see Draco only through her eyes. Good job and keep the writing coming!

This is an outstanding story, and I dearly hope you will have more time to update it. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Holy shit, I so love this fic of yours! It's so freaking awesome and whatnot! The plot's quite amazing, as well as the character portrayal, I just love the way you've Draco and Hermione interacting and the smut's hot as hell!

Furthermore, I love the "moodswings" of Draco, the way; one moment he's sorta all possessive and whatnot, and the next he's all sweet and caring, I just love the mix!

Please update again and that soon, please!