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by brandnewdaydawning

person silver
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yous story is really interesting...and i hope you will continue it soon...i am curious as how this strang relationship between drac and hermione will turn out...thank you
person silver
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yous story is really interesting...and i hope you will continue it soon...i am curious how this \"relationship\" between draco and hermione will turn out...thank you
person Stanley Steemer
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It\'s one of the most romantic things i\'ve ever read! :3 I\'m quite literally reading this for the plot. So awesome!
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. I especially liked the part where he gave her red silk sheets. It made me smile.
person slyswn
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all I would like to see that plot is just as important as anything else in the story so I am glad you have given us some plot.

Next I totally agree with everything you said and your reason behind writing the last chapter as you did. In Rowling\'s world it is seen through Harry\'s eyes but you are certainly not Rowling so you should be able to write your story as you stay fit.

Besides I happen to like your writing style and I think you are quite talented

I look forward to more of this fine story.

If some people don\'t like it too freakin\' bad

Rock on!

Update again soon!
person Anon
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on you have to upload something new!!
person catwalker
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who the fuck cares if they\'re OOC? it\'s your story, they have no right to complain. obviously they like it enough to keep reading so they should just suck it up.


lol. i for one LOVE this fic, even if they are currently only 3 chappies. i want more and need more... you\'re portrayal of malfoy always \"Accidentally-on-purpose\" being there at the right moment to save mione is perfect. and their whole twisted love scene is great. i like how malfoy knows enough not to have sex with granger because i think it\'s because he knows that he\'s not right for her, in fact, he\'s quite wrong.

obviously, i am desperate for you to update...
person madame malfoys mirror
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM

This is marvelous. I love the breathless detail and the soft, romantic phrasing. My favorite phrase is \"she pulled his body into alignment with hers.\" I like it because it\'s cleanly elegant, not overdramatic...

I like her hesitation in touching him, I love his reluctant fascination with her.

Very well done first chapter. I look forward to reading more.

Madame
person KaraQ
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always I love it, and I really liked the way you portrayed some of this chapter from Harry\'s point of View. Lol, I\'d love to see our little Dracy-pooh get jealous. That ought to be fun. Keep up the good work. I\'m looking forwrd to the next (hopefully a bit smuttier) chapter.
~KaraQ
person rogue3011
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, well i was hoping for there to be more of malfoy but i guess i can wait. :) i think you are going fine the way you are. The characters are great.....the story is great......keep it up