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for Obscurity

by brandnewdaydawning

person Michelle
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME CHAPTER! I love the details and the way you describe Draco. This is an absoultely awesome story! I hope it\'s very long. Update soon please.
person Ivy
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story please please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!
person fiona
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! i wonder when they\'ll give into themselfs, lol. please update soon oh and i love the letters!
person bubbles
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH how I love your story ! ! ! When I saw that you\'d updated, my heart started pounding because I was so eager to read the update. You\'d better update soon :P

okay, in all seriousness, this was a good chapter as were all of your other chapters. I think the lack of smut was fine and it\'ll probably only benefit the story later on. I really love how passionate this story is.

Keep it up and update soon . :)
person crazy di
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic! The letters were pretty cool, and please update soon! =D
person Cecille
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m in love with this story. I think you got Hermione and Draco perfectly right. And, I love the pace of your plot and I think your style is fantastic. There\'s a cadence to your words--almost like poetry, and it matches the tone of your story very well. Keep up the fantastic work.
person Hanna Delacour
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I liked the Great Hall scene... I just like a frustrated Hermione I guess, lol. I also thought the letters to be rather clever. Can\'t wait for the next installment
person the earth guise
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! Another update :). You know, I don\'t think it matters if Hr is looking for answers in books or not re her feelings for Draco. She\'s grown up, I think it makes sense for her to change a bit as she ages even if it seems OOC compared to how she was younger. Besides, it\'s nice to read a well-written, plausible if slightly different Hr- the reader can see her change and grow. Isn\'t the specualtion part of the fun?

anyway, I really like this story and look forward to the next chapter :)
person Anon
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurry and update... now =)

Love your story
person anon
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my freakin gosh! i\'d just discovered this story and boy am i glad. this is one of the BEST DMHR fics i\'d ever read. ur writing style is really what captures me the most. i just love the way u word ur sentences and brilliantly switch the POVs. i also love the twists in the plots and the dimensions u add to the characters. sure, they can be classified as OOC, but w/the way u write ur characters and incorporate them into ur story, the extra aspects to their personalities become believable and only serves to make this story more unique and interesting anyway, bottom-line is that i really really enjoyed this story and simply LOVE it. keep writing please! can\'t wait to read the next chapter!

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