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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well Rain, this was a fun chappie. I really like a challenging, smart Draco. I actually really like your Hermione as well. She\'s nice and well rounded. I just think you\'re doing a fantastic job on both stories. (By the by...when is the next chappie of my other favorite \'Rain\' story going to be up? HINT, HINT)
Anywhoo..liking it more and more.
I added both of your stories to my Yahoo Group story links file. I have a small HP group of about 45 people and we\'re building up quite a nice library of great HP stories...I added yours the other day and was singing your praises too! GRIN.
If you\'d like to check out the group, here is the link: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/hpthreekeysfanfictiongroup/ - I\'d love to have you stop by some time!
So, okay, I\'m off. Think you\'re doing a wonderful job and can\'t wait for the next chappie!
Cheers,
Lorett
Anywhoo..liking it more and more.
I added both of your stories to my Yahoo Group story links file. I have a small HP group of about 45 people and we\'re building up quite a nice library of great HP stories...I added yours the other day and was singing your praises too! GRIN.
If you\'d like to check out the group, here is the link: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/hpthreekeysfanfictiongroup/ - I\'d love to have you stop by some time!
So, okay, I\'m off. Think you\'re doing a wonderful job and can\'t wait for the next chappie!
Cheers,
Lorett
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read more!
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gee I like your stories.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAHAHAHAHA! I\'m really enjoying how things are playing out in this fic!! Please write more soon!
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That last line was priceless. I love the plot, the writing and basically everything about it! Keep on writing!
-Lost in a fairytale
(421-10)
-Lost in a fairytale
(421-10)
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Rain,
WHAT A LITTLE TEASE YOU ARE!
Okay, well, I love this chapter too. I\'m IN LOVE with both of your stories, it\'s official!
I can\'t wait for the next chappie.
Keep up the great work.
Lorett
WHAT A LITTLE TEASE YOU ARE!
Okay, well, I love this chapter too. I\'m IN LOVE with both of your stories, it\'s official!
I can\'t wait for the next chappie.
Keep up the great work.
Lorett
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god... Pant pant pant!
Great story. my only complaint is you need to watch your grammar a little closer. Check out this site. Funny too. http://www.creativeteachingsite.com/humorgrammar.htm . this might also be useful http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/ or this one http://englishplus.com/grammar/mistcont.htm
Anyway, I really liked the story and can\'t wait to see an update.
Great story. my only complaint is you need to watch your grammar a little closer. Check out this site. Funny too. http://www.creativeteachingsite.com/humorgrammar.htm . this might also be useful http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/ or this one http://englishplus.com/grammar/mistcont.htm
Anyway, I really liked the story and can\'t wait to see an update.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I enjoyed this very much! You are great with words, and I love the way you write characters. I like that you have fleshed out Hermione but have still kept her in character. I cannot wait to read another chapter!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so bad and yet so very damn good. Not to mention the perfect amount of steam I like in a fic. rock on!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m in love with this story. Everything is just perfect. Their conversation, arguments, though tamer and more mature, are still Hermione and Draco. And everytime they\'re together there\'s always tension and they\'re just explosive together. And there\'s no smut yet but it\'s already hot. I love this! I hope you write the next chapter soon...but I also wouldn\'t mind if you update your other fic. Thanks for writing and giving D/Hr fans something worthwhile to read.